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3/22/2007 c1 4Merc-chan
Your last fic is from 2004? Bad Mayumi-chan! j/k Ne, ne... let's forget about writer's block... it's time to start writing again!
4/26/2004 c1 9AJ Maxwell
Really sweet fic! I love the last line. =D *back to cuddling sen and kosh plushies*
3/16/2004 c1 2ryosashi
mayumi-chan!~ kawaii ne! ^_^
3/13/2004 c1 Anselyna
Hi, whoopee! looks like I'm the first reviewer of many more to come ^.^
Aside from some grammatical errors, it was a really nice story to read. I especially love how you managed to bring out Koshino's thoughts/personality in a relatively simple manner plus the snowflake analogy was appropriate. The flow of the story was smooth and easy to read.

My fav. lines in the chapter was ,
"He wasn’t the sane pillar in my insane life but he was quite the opposite. He was the insane pillar in my very predictable and very sane life. I didn’t mind having him around."
That was a great way to describe their relationship. Kudos to a job well done!
Will you write another chapter from Sendoh's POV? Or better still, do a continuation of this story?
Hope that you'll continue to write wonderful Senkosh fics.. after all we, Senkosh fans must band together, ne? ^.^

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