
3/4/2010 c32 wotumba1
great finish to a wonderful story!
so glad that you let nancy be in charge of stockwell enterprises, she really deserves that job!
(you do know how to write girl-power wonderfully, you know?)
loved it, and again, off to your next one in line!
great finish to a wonderful story!
so glad that you let nancy be in charge of stockwell enterprises, she really deserves that job!
(you do know how to write girl-power wonderfully, you know?)
loved it, and again, off to your next one in line!
3/3/2010 c15 wotumba1
*blushes deeply*
thanks for your reply, how very sweet of you!
been way over my head in work this week so i had and have to put reading your fics aside a little, that's why i just made it to this chapter so far :-(
just wanted to say that i always enjoy strong female characters (there's so little of them around anyway) and really like - no make it "love" - your nancy! she's the perfect match for an unconventional - maybe even slightly mad - pilot like HM himself...
hope i'll be able to get back to you soon!
oh and thanks for the "timeline" for reading your stuff, i kinda figured it out so far i guess...
*blushes deeply*
thanks for your reply, how very sweet of you!
been way over my head in work this week so i had and have to put reading your fics aside a little, that's why i just made it to this chapter so far :-(
just wanted to say that i always enjoy strong female characters (there's so little of them around anyway) and really like - no make it "love" - your nancy! she's the perfect match for an unconventional - maybe even slightly mad - pilot like HM himself...
hope i'll be able to get back to you soon!
oh and thanks for the "timeline" for reading your stuff, i kinda figured it out so far i guess...
9/8/2005 c32
30HonorSkywalker
I just love this series! Murdock is definitely one of my favourite characters ever, and the mysteries Nancy gets involved in reminds me of the Kat Colorado Mysteries by Karen Kijewski. A must read!

I just love this series! Murdock is definitely one of my favourite characters ever, and the mysteries Nancy gets involved in reminds me of the Kat Colorado Mysteries by Karen Kijewski. A must read!
4/12/2004 c31 Amanda
Great story! Enjoyed reading it! Hope you write a squel to this! (this review is suppose to go to chapter 32 but it wounldn't let me review grr...) :-)
Great story! Enjoyed reading it! Hope you write a squel to this! (this review is suppose to go to chapter 32 but it wounldn't let me review grr...) :-)
4/12/2004 c32 Caligurl
That was great! I throughly enjoyed reading it! I hope a sequel is in the works!
That was great! I throughly enjoyed reading it! I hope a sequel is in the works!
4/11/2004 c16 Amanda
i like it! i'll read some more tomarrow!
i like it! i'll read some more tomarrow!
4/11/2004 c12 Caligurl
It's great...i'm enjoying it so far..
It's great...i'm enjoying it so far..
4/7/2004 c6 Caligurl
Good! i'm reading it slowly but surely :-)
Good! i'm reading it slowly but surely :-)
4/5/2004 c4 Caligurl
Good chapter!
Good chapter!
3/18/2004 c32 snickers
Man, I didn't want it to end. I suppose every author has to have an ending. This was as good as a place to do so; as long as you have a sequel or prequal.
Snickers
Man, I didn't want it to end. I suppose every author has to have an ending. This was as good as a place to do so; as long as you have a sequel or prequal.
Snickers
3/18/2004 c21 snickers
Nancy is stretching herself thin for a pregnant women. A full-time job, singing, pregnant with twins, wife, and now maybe rung the business. I have nothing against it, but I'm exhausted reading about the Team and wives lives.
Can you spread some energy to your readers?
Nancy is stretching herself thin for a pregnant women. A full-time job, singing, pregnant with twins, wife, and now maybe rung the business. I have nothing against it, but I'm exhausted reading about the Team and wives lives.
Can you spread some energy to your readers?
3/18/2004 c20 snickers
Real nice dialogue between Hannibal and Stockwell. Very on target. Please don't make me stay up to midnight to finish this series!
snickers
Real nice dialogue between Hannibal and Stockwell. Very on target. Please don't make me stay up to midnight to finish this series!
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3/17/2004 c7 snickers
Loved this section. Murdock landing in Langley is priceless! I wish I could finish this tonight, but alas sleep must come. You should post this also to w.ateamfanfic.org also.
Loved this section. Murdock landing in Langley is priceless! I wish I could finish this tonight, but alas sleep must come. You should post this also to w.ateamfanfic.org also.
3/17/2004 c32
12Morrowsong
A perfect ending to a perfect story. I don't say this often but I truly enjoyed reading this. I hope to read more of your work soon.

A perfect ending to a perfect story. I don't say this often but I truly enjoyed reading this. I hope to read more of your work soon.