
9/4/2004 c1
3lollipopstick
Heya! :D Nice story! Great Characterization! The way you descirbed Dagger,Garnet and Sarah is so intense. The starting is really catchy and humoruos! Good Work! Keep it up!
-lollie

Heya! :D Nice story! Great Characterization! The way you descirbed Dagger,Garnet and Sarah is so intense. The starting is really catchy and humoruos! Good Work! Keep it up!
-lollie
3/20/2004 c1
7Dante Gemini
That's it? Well, it started it out humorous and then got into it, but then, it stopped. It had a good stream of consciousness going. Well, write more; please read and review, "Gone with the Food," if you get a chance too, thanks.

That's it? Well, it started it out humorous and then got into it, but then, it stopped. It had a good stream of consciousness going. Well, write more; please read and review, "Gone with the Food," if you get a chance too, thanks.