for A New Life7/6/2022 c9 Guest
More please
More please
6/3/2015 c6 Opal
john and Hermione defiantly in a way their powers are similar
john and Hermione defiantly in a way their powers are similar
4/13/2008 c1 
10Wonderbee31
This is looking to be an interesting start here, and will be curious to see how things will go for Harry here, as he seems to be hanging onto his temper by a thread.
10Wonderbee31This is looking to be an interesting start here, and will be curious to see how things will go for Harry here, as he seems to be hanging onto his temper by a thread.
1/20/2008 c10 Dee Dee
I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I also think that it should be a Hermione/John fic. Keep up the good work and update soon!
I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I also think that it should be a Hermione/John fic. Keep up the good work and update soon!
3/22/2007 c10 11pstibbons
Very nice - I was looking forward, once I finished chapter 9, to reading chapter 10 and then... tragedy! It was an Author's Note. Please O Pretty Please Could you fix this... :)
11pstibbonsVery nice - I was looking forward, once I finished chapter 9, to reading chapter 10 and then... tragedy! It was an Author's Note. Please O Pretty Please Could you fix this... :)
1/26/2007 c10 3Nehfi-Tirri
Hey, I like you story ok; the plot and story-line are nice... However you writing technique does, for lack of better words, sucks... To me it seems 'cold' and not very deep, with lacking in general descrpsions of the people; it's like I can't 'feel' them through the writing...
Also, you should try to look through you chapters before you upload them for smaller spelling errors (though thiese aren't too bad...) but very much to get the names front letter with a BIG letter... This may sound snuppish/bitchy, however it's not meant in a bad way, but it's really irretating to read names with small front letter; doesn't seem right, or something, not sure o_0
3Nehfi-TirriHey, I like you story ok; the plot and story-line are nice... However you writing technique does, for lack of better words, sucks... To me it seems 'cold' and not very deep, with lacking in general descrpsions of the people; it's like I can't 'feel' them through the writing...
Also, you should try to look through you chapters before you upload them for smaller spelling errors (though thiese aren't too bad...) but very much to get the names front letter with a BIG letter... This may sound snuppish/bitchy, however it's not meant in a bad way, but it's really irretating to read names with small front letter; doesn't seem right, or something, not sure o_0
11/23/2006 c10 OMG
I started reading this story just now and i finished the first chapter liking what I read and then i saw you had stopped at an authors note.This is usually what authors do when they discontinue a fic and it really would have ticked me off because this is a good story, anyway like I said great story hope you dont stop.
I started reading this story just now and i finished the first chapter liking what I read and then i saw you had stopped at an authors note.This is usually what authors do when they discontinue a fic and it really would have ticked me off because this is a good story, anyway like I said great story hope you dont stop.
10/9/2006 c10 bloodREDhairedGIRL676
Dude your story is wicked sick hurry up and update.
rock on gryffin
Dude your story is wicked sick hurry up and update.
rock on gryffin
10/4/2006 c1 gryffin
dude this story is wicked sick! Rock on!
dude this story is wicked sick! Rock on!
9/21/2006 c10 bloody depressed
i like it! but just wondering when things will be ok between Hermione and Harry again
i like it! but just wondering when things will be ok between Hermione and Harry again