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4/11/2004 c4 the amker
too short
4/11/2004 c4 3chris-warren876
good so far, except the fact that the chapters are very short, and that you keep putting u, instead of you ^_^ but thats ok. Update soon ^_^
4/11/2004 c4 sum1
It wz pretty good. could've been longer though. Good work so far though ::thumps up::
4/10/2004 c4 9Hermione Graner Potter
It is getting good! Keep going! I cant wait to see their new powers are!
4/9/2004 c3 3Mr. Happy Java Man
PRETTY COOL SO FAR. YOU COULD DO WITH LONGER CHAPTERS THOUGH. OTHER THAN THAT ITS COOL. GET TO THE MUTANT ABILITIES SOON!
3/25/2004 c3 3coolone007
I would sugest putting more into each chapter. the first three chapters could have been just one.
3/24/2004 c2 9Hermione Graner Potter
It could be longer! But i like it! Please contuine!
3/23/2004 c2 The Eromancer
the second chapter suck as well!
3/23/2004 c1 The Eromancer
the first chapter SUCKS!
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