for A New Life4/11/2004 c4 the amker
too short
too short
4/11/2004 c4 
3chris-warren876
good so far, except the fact that the chapters are very short, and that you keep putting u, instead of you ^_^ but thats ok. Update soon ^_^
3chris-warren876good so far, except the fact that the chapters are very short, and that you keep putting u, instead of you ^_^ but thats ok. Update soon ^_^
4/11/2004 c4 sum1
It wz pretty good. could've been longer though. Good work so far though ::thumps up::
It wz pretty good. could've been longer though. Good work so far though ::thumps up::
4/10/2004 c4 9Hermione Graner Potter
It is getting good! Keep going! I cant wait to see their new powers are!
9Hermione Graner PotterIt is getting good! Keep going! I cant wait to see their new powers are!
4/9/2004 c3 3Mr. Happy Java Man
PRETTY COOL SO FAR. YOU COULD DO WITH LONGER CHAPTERS THOUGH. OTHER THAN THAT ITS COOL. GET TO THE MUTANT ABILITIES SOON!
3Mr. Happy Java ManPRETTY COOL SO FAR. YOU COULD DO WITH LONGER CHAPTERS THOUGH. OTHER THAN THAT ITS COOL. GET TO THE MUTANT ABILITIES SOON!
3/25/2004 c3 3coolone007
I would sugest putting more into each chapter. the first three chapters could have been just one.
3coolone007I would sugest putting more into each chapter. the first three chapters could have been just one.