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4/25/2004 c1 6Tom Valor
WOW! That is one lucky mage to pick up a wizard hat a heaven ring and a gasmask all in a single day of monster hunting! But seriously, Your fic is interesting but could use some improvement. Try writing the dialogues in a seperate pragraph, it would help make the story more readable. Keep writing though, I also noticed that the main character has a habit of talking to himself.

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