for The Cradle Will Fall12/30/2007 c18 
1Atilia Dawn Black
I'm really interested to see where this is going. So much drama and deception. Just one little question, was it really draco who went with hermione to the hot spring thing or was it Lucius? I'm just a little confused.
Also, I've added this story to my story alert, so I'm hoping you are going to continue this story, but seeing as how u havent updated in 9 months I think my hopes are dashed. Here's to hoping.
1Atilia Dawn BlackI'm really interested to see where this is going. So much drama and deception. Just one little question, was it really draco who went with hermione to the hot spring thing or was it Lucius? I'm just a little confused.
Also, I've added this story to my story alert, so I'm hoping you are going to continue this story, but seeing as how u havent updated in 9 months I think my hopes are dashed. Here's to hoping.
4/8/2006 c18 TNgirl
Great story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Draco gets a backbone and somehow Hermione and Harry forgive him...? I'll be looking for your update!
Great story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Draco gets a backbone and somehow Hermione and Harry forgive him...? I'll be looking for your update!
3/17/2006 c18 ScarletAshes
Hi!
I've been reading your story since the beginning and I really enjoy it... I'm a huge fan of Draco/Hermione fluff :P
You latest chapter was bit short for my liking, but hey, it happens to the best fo us.
Now all I'm hoping is that you have a happy ending in the works, because I would be distraught if it ended in tragedy. Keep writing hey?
Hi!
I've been reading your story since the beginning and I really enjoy it... I'm a huge fan of Draco/Hermione fluff :P
You latest chapter was bit short for my liking, but hey, it happens to the best fo us.
Now all I'm hoping is that you have a happy ending in the works, because I would be distraught if it ended in tragedy. Keep writing hey?
12/29/2005 c16 7StarrySkyAtNight
I truely love this story. It's so good and well thought out. How did you come up with the plan that Narcissa put into action to save Lucius? It was absolutely brilliant. It was so good I was kinda glad when it worked...hate to see a good plan fail. Poor Draco's going crazy and Harry and Hermione are not looking to good. Please hurry and let us all know whats up...i hope Dannys ok...
7StarrySkyAtNightI truely love this story. It's so good and well thought out. How did you come up with the plan that Narcissa put into action to save Lucius? It was absolutely brilliant. It was so good I was kinda glad when it worked...hate to see a good plan fail. Poor Draco's going crazy and Harry and Hermione are not looking to good. Please hurry and let us all know whats up...i hope Dannys ok...
12/29/2005 c16 4frozenroses
Original & well-written. Daniel sounds adorable lol. Keep up the good work!
4frozenrosesOriginal & well-written. Daniel sounds adorable lol. Keep up the good work!
11/14/2005 c15 8LadyJaye
Good story but I'm a bit confused. Who did Hermoine skip class with..Draco or Lucius (creepy)? And was it REALLY Draco who raped her in fifth year or did Lucius perhaps use the polyjuice potion then too? Draco couldn't seem to remember much about the night of the party except for what Blaise told him? Update soon please...:D The twists and turns are a good thing just so you know...keeps u guessing.
8LadyJayeGood story but I'm a bit confused. Who did Hermoine skip class with..Draco or Lucius (creepy)? And was it REALLY Draco who raped her in fifth year or did Lucius perhaps use the polyjuice potion then too? Draco couldn't seem to remember much about the night of the party except for what Blaise told him? Update soon please...:D The twists and turns are a good thing just so you know...keeps u guessing.
11/14/2005 c15 black-rose-wilts
I loved this story when I read it before but that was a really evil cliff hanger to leave us all on!
Still good but that last chapted made no sense to me, who the hell is Martin?
I loved this story when I read it before but that was a really evil cliff hanger to leave us all on!
Still good but that last chapted made no sense to me, who the hell is Martin?
11/14/2005 c13 Karen
wtf? You have a lot of explaining to do. How did Lucius find out? I'm glad you still made Draco somewhat weak and unwilling to disobey his father. SuddenlyHero!Malfoy is a little disturbing. Very exciting story, and I really like the characterization of Harry throughout this story. Confused, but still carrying, but very short-tempered with Malfoy.
wtf? You have a lot of explaining to do. How did Lucius find out? I'm glad you still made Draco somewhat weak and unwilling to disobey his father. SuddenlyHero!Malfoy is a little disturbing. Very exciting story, and I really like the characterization of Harry throughout this story. Confused, but still carrying, but very short-tempered with Malfoy.
6/7/2005 c10 Doodle0876
Uh...yeah im pretty sure the ending of this chapter was unclear! I dont get it, did hermione fall or did Lucius and McNair fall? *confused*
Uh...yeah im pretty sure the ending of this chapter was unclear! I dont get it, did hermione fall or did Lucius and McNair fall? *confused*
1/14/2005 c10 lilgreenGremlin420
oh no oh no oh no did you just kill off Hermione? NO No NO anyway cool story post soon VERY soon hurry i just have to no what happens i am hooked hurry hurry hurry go go go post post post! ;)
oh no oh no oh no did you just kill off Hermione? NO No NO anyway cool story post soon VERY soon hurry i just have to no what happens i am hooked hurry hurry hurry go go go post post post! ;)
9/19/2004 c10 6rani singala
omg i can't belive it.it has a buch of twists and stuff. it's really good plz cont.
6rani singalaomg i can't belive it.it has a buch of twists and stuff. it's really good plz cont.