for Everything5/31/2006 c1 
2CLee36
I LOVE carby, and while I'm really glad you wrote this, I just have to point out that it was a little hard on the eyes that you didn't space out the dialogue more. That...and there was no punctuation, and there was netspeak which makes the flow, uhh, nonexistant. But still I really like carby, and since there are only a handful of ER fics on here, I still enjoyed it.
2CLee36I LOVE carby, and while I'm really glad you wrote this, I just have to point out that it was a little hard on the eyes that you didn't space out the dialogue more. That...and there was no punctuation, and there was netspeak which makes the flow, uhh, nonexistant. But still I really like carby, and since there are only a handful of ER fics on here, I still enjoyed it.
2/14/2005 c1 1DramaDreamer08
I just found this story and it is one of the best CARBY stories I've ever read!
1DramaDreamer08I just found this story and it is one of the best CARBY stories I've ever read!
4/2/2004 c1 CelticStar15
this was good, a little confusing at the end, but good, are u going to continue? :)
this was good, a little confusing at the end, but good, are u going to continue? :)
4/2/2004 c1 15tessmagnolia
Great story idea, which you wrote and portrayed really well.
I think a lot of people were hoping for more reaction from Abby, but her reaction showed how much she's grown over the last few months and how Carter's character has changed and not entirely for the better.
I have one suggestion and that is that you get a beta, as it is hard to read words such as 'cos' during a story and there were a few grammatical errors.
Apart from that well done.
I'd love to read more of your work.
15tessmagnoliaGreat story idea, which you wrote and portrayed really well.
I think a lot of people were hoping for more reaction from Abby, but her reaction showed how much she's grown over the last few months and how Carter's character has changed and not entirely for the better.
I have one suggestion and that is that you get a beta, as it is hard to read words such as 'cos' during a story and there were a few grammatical errors.
Apart from that well done.
I'd love to read more of your work.