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6/8/2004 c1 Shintaro Korya
nice story. i found it very very funny!^_^ . i think i better let my pet lunatic run free now before it sinks it's huge fangs into my neck... heheheheh!
5/18/2004 c1 6Shanice Miharu
cute!
4/10/2004 c1 3Eruda
lmfao XD I
4/7/2004 c1 Dustrega
AWESOME! It's not only part Ragnarok it's part Monty Python! Great job...just a few spelling errors here and there...I'll help ya out if ya need it ^_^ however it was a great story I loved it!
4/6/2004 c1 lady knight
ok. a nasty lunatic. very funny.
4/5/2004 c1 Ana
nakakatawa grabi mali ngalang spelling mo sa
friend sa fourth to the last line pero aliw
4/5/2004 c1 7Rosemary Parkinsons
Here is a list of comments about your piece, as I am not good with real reviews of this nature.
1. NI! NI!
2. "Robin, brave sir Robin, rode forth from Camelot"
I think you should have included a minstrel in the story.
3. I also think you should use more description, but that is just me.
4. I would like... a shrubbery!
5. Nice story thingy!
6. GO MONTY PYTHON!
7. I enjoyed your story, however, it was a bit too similar to the actual thing. Try to be a bit more creative.
8. Goodbye Monty Python Buddy!

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