
7/6/2005 c9
1Bloodshy Testament
Beautiful! Another Chapter awesomely written. You had a bit of a comma problem, I noticed... not enough of them, where they should be. But you definately made up for it with the breathtaking imagery in the battle scene, marvalous! I await the next chapter on the edge of my seat...
~The Bloodshy Testament

Beautiful! Another Chapter awesomely written. You had a bit of a comma problem, I noticed... not enough of them, where they should be. But you definately made up for it with the breathtaking imagery in the battle scene, marvalous! I await the next chapter on the edge of my seat...
~The Bloodshy Testament
5/6/2005 c9
66Meushell
It took me this long to realize you updated. I thought you abandoned the story, so I stopped checking. Nice effect the magic has on them. Remember, Flea followed them around in bat form before they fought him. (In the game it makes it fun to fight Slash first because then Flea basically sat there and watched Slash lose.) If you are going to take so long to update, you should at least make the chapters longer. Hmm, if Frog can't double or triple his techs here, does that include using the sword while another char uses his/her weapon of choice?

It took me this long to realize you updated. I thought you abandoned the story, so I stopped checking. Nice effect the magic has on them. Remember, Flea followed them around in bat form before they fought him. (In the game it makes it fun to fight Slash first because then Flea basically sat there and watched Slash lose.) If you are going to take so long to update, you should at least make the chapters longer. Hmm, if Frog can't double or triple his techs here, does that include using the sword while another char uses his/her weapon of choice?
11/20/2004 c9 Triffid
Wow! I really, really, really like this story. It's very well written! I hope you update soon, it's fantastic so far!
Wow! I really, really, really like this story. It's very well written! I hope you update soon, it's fantastic so far!
6/26/2004 c8
16Mystical Jade
Ooh, I love that scene in the game... Along with the music - awesome! The fight through the castle should prove interesting. And also, what Spekkio expects of Glenn took me by surprise, a little! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.

Ooh, I love that scene in the game... Along with the music - awesome! The fight through the castle should prove interesting. And also, what Spekkio expects of Glenn took me by surprise, a little! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.
6/22/2004 c8
1Bloodshy Testament
This is an awesome ficcie! I love it- keep on going! The only real problem I have with it is Frog's speech... he really sounds less shakespeareian in this than in the game, but that'
s fine. I know it's hard to get that midevil thing... I hate it. Other wize, lovin' it!
~Bloodshy Testmant~

This is an awesome ficcie! I love it- keep on going! The only real problem I have with it is Frog's speech... he really sounds less shakespeareian in this than in the game, but that'
s fine. I know it's hard to get that midevil thing... I hate it. Other wize, lovin' it!
~Bloodshy Testmant~