
5/31/2004 c1
8All Mighty Terrestrial
Oh, yeah. This is brilliantly written. I've read a lot of stories where I get lost in trying to pin down the details and continuity, but here I don't feel that way. The back story is THERE, even if it isn't written. You can feel it in every little shadow you don't quite see.

Oh, yeah. This is brilliantly written. I've read a lot of stories where I get lost in trying to pin down the details and continuity, but here I don't feel that way. The back story is THERE, even if it isn't written. You can feel it in every little shadow you don't quite see.
5/8/2004 c1 siren
this is one of the best sark stories i've read in awhile and it really deserves more than two reviews!
this is one of the best sark stories i've read in awhile and it really deserves more than two reviews!
5/5/2004 c1
26eretria
Blimey. Thank you so much for commenting on one of my pieces, or I never would have found this gem of a story.
Your prose is amazing: Clear, succinct, to the point. The dialogue is as sharp as it should be between them. The set-up makes sense, you don't need a whole heap of backstory, it just *works*.
I'm quite out of words over this, to be honest.
Fantastic writing. A true joy to discover. Thank you!

Blimey. Thank you so much for commenting on one of my pieces, or I never would have found this gem of a story.
Your prose is amazing: Clear, succinct, to the point. The dialogue is as sharp as it should be between them. The set-up makes sense, you don't need a whole heap of backstory, it just *works*.
I'm quite out of words over this, to be honest.
Fantastic writing. A true joy to discover. Thank you!