for Baker Street Irregulars12/27/2023 c4 SMB
Fuck off with that stupid shit! I wanted a Harry revenge story and after four chapters of fucking setup and a timeskip of fucking years after canon and they would have lost before Harry is broken out of prison. There's only one fucking chapter left and you're having them fight over fucking religious relics like the fucking Holy Grail that's never fucking mentioned in any fucking Harry Potter story ever.
FUCKING GARBAGE!
Fuck off with that stupid shit! I wanted a Harry revenge story and after four chapters of fucking setup and a timeskip of fucking years after canon and they would have lost before Harry is broken out of prison. There's only one fucking chapter left and you're having them fight over fucking religious relics like the fucking Holy Grail that's never fucking mentioned in any fucking Harry Potter story ever.
FUCKING GARBAGE!
2112/4/2021 c5 mumphie
Had hoped that this would be a tad less crack. There's no resolution, no - Harry on Dumbles explosion on why Dumbles was such an idiot.
Ah well.
Had hoped that this would be a tad less crack. There's no resolution, no - Harry on Dumbles explosion on why Dumbles was such an idiot.
Ah well.
3/19/2021 c1 Guest
I have to roll my eyes at these “Harry is wrongfully accused/imprisoned” stories. What about veritaserum? Wizard’s oaths? Priori incantatum? He could be proven not guilty in about one minute using any of these.
I have to roll my eyes at these “Harry is wrongfully accused/imprisoned” stories. What about veritaserum? Wizard’s oaths? Priori incantatum? He could be proven not guilty in about one minute using any of these.
3/14/2021 c2 alexaguamenti
Your stream of consciousness writing is really well done. I’m loving the story so far!
Your stream of consciousness writing is really well done. I’m loving the story so far!
10/23/2020 c3 Matt
How would they be having dinner at Grimmauld Place? Sirius is dead. Either the house would be left to the Malfoys, or it would be left to Harry, or it would be left to Remus. Possibly to Andromeda. Either way, the Order shouldn't have access to it.
How would they be having dinner at Grimmauld Place? Sirius is dead. Either the house would be left to the Malfoys, or it would be left to Harry, or it would be left to Remus. Possibly to Andromeda. Either way, the Order shouldn't have access to it.
10/23/2020 c1 Matt
A "dingy" magically rowing itself? Dingy is an adjective, not a noun. You meant a dinghy, which is a small boat. I've noticed your spelling is pretty bad at times. You could use a beta. As for whether or not Dumbledore would believe Harry, whether he believed him or not, after Sirius would he allow another person to be sent to Azkaban without a trial? Without the use of Veritaserum? It's such an easy thing to do, to prove guilt or innocence. And Dumbledore knows that innocents have been sent to Azkaban without trial in the past - Sirius and Hagrid at the very least.
A "dingy" magically rowing itself? Dingy is an adjective, not a noun. You meant a dinghy, which is a small boat. I've noticed your spelling is pretty bad at times. You could use a beta. As for whether or not Dumbledore would believe Harry, whether he believed him or not, after Sirius would he allow another person to be sent to Azkaban without a trial? Without the use of Veritaserum? It's such an easy thing to do, to prove guilt or innocence. And Dumbledore knows that innocents have been sent to Azkaban without trial in the past - Sirius and Hagrid at the very least.
1/5/2020 c5 langeline
I understand you putting this as complete in a sense. hope the story has legs on its surreal own to do its own travelling.
I understand you putting this as complete in a sense. hope the story has legs on its surreal own to do its own travelling.
6/13/2019 c5 gginsc
I am sorry to hear about your friend. That said, I wish you had not labeled this story complete.
I am sorry to hear about your friend. That said, I wish you had not labeled this story complete.
3/28/2019 c2 missgsmith51
I forgot to ask ... is Joseph Appleby, the "new member" who was following Harry, the one whose "crack" Harry heard when he was walking? Is HE, perhaps, the killer? After all, it was an Order member, Peter, who betrayed James and Lily and framed Sirius. Dung, too, has certainly shown himself to be unreliable as a guard. Either he sleeps (or passes out) on his watch, or he leaves altogether to pursue his shady business ventures. This Joseph could have stolen some of Harry's DNA - since Harry was outside for several hours - dropped it into polyjuice cocktail, and voila! The perfect frame.
I forgot to ask ... is Joseph Appleby, the "new member" who was following Harry, the one whose "crack" Harry heard when he was walking? Is HE, perhaps, the killer? After all, it was an Order member, Peter, who betrayed James and Lily and framed Sirius. Dung, too, has certainly shown himself to be unreliable as a guard. Either he sleeps (or passes out) on his watch, or he leaves altogether to pursue his shady business ventures. This Joseph could have stolen some of Harry's DNA - since Harry was outside for several hours - dropped it into polyjuice cocktail, and voila! The perfect frame.
3/28/2019 c5 missgsmith51
Once again, I pay for not checking to see if the last chapter really IS the last chapter of the story or just the last chapter the author plans to write, for various reasons. I need to return to my cynical,
untrusting ways, I think.
That said, I'm really sorry about your friend. Perhaps someday you can finish this story as a tribute to your friend and how he inspired you.
Once again, I pay for not checking to see if the last chapter really IS the last chapter of the story or just the last chapter the author plans to write, for various reasons. I need to return to my cynical,
untrusting ways, I think.
That said, I'm really sorry about your friend. Perhaps someday you can finish this story as a tribute to your friend and how he inspired you.
3/28/2019 c1 missgsmith51
"Dumbledore is merely human and can't read minds." Since when? We know from canon that he is actually a skilled LEGILIMENS, one who CAN see inside minds and read thoughts. He tells Harry this in his office, following Sirius's death.
I'm curious ... where was the trial? Where was the questioning under Veritaserum? Does the Wizarding world never learn? Stupid question ... Of course they don't. That's why they are still stuck 200 years in the past. Poor Harry! At least, he has some supporters, though I'm curious about Ron's "livid" face. Is he livid because Harry has been wrongly accused (again!) and imprisoned, or is he livid for some other reason? With Ron, one never knows.
"Dumbledore is merely human and can't read minds." Since when? We know from canon that he is actually a skilled LEGILIMENS, one who CAN see inside minds and read thoughts. He tells Harry this in his office, following Sirius's death.
I'm curious ... where was the trial? Where was the questioning under Veritaserum? Does the Wizarding world never learn? Stupid question ... Of course they don't. That's why they are still stuck 200 years in the past. Poor Harry! At least, he has some supporters, though I'm curious about Ron's "livid" face. Is he livid because Harry has been wrongly accused (again!) and imprisoned, or is he livid for some other reason? With Ron, one never knows.
12/8/2018 c5 Guest
I'm sorry the story died with your friend but I totally understand. Maybe someday your soul will relax and you'll be able to complete the story in his honor.
I'm sorry the story died with your friend but I totally understand. Maybe someday your soul will relax and you'll be able to complete the story in his honor.