for Baker Street Irregulars5/25/2004 c3 ADJ
This story is pretty well done. Not neccessarily original in nature, but a somewhat entertaining story nonetheless. What hinders this story is the terrible, post-fifth book fanfiction representation of ron. Your characterization does not take into consideration the way ron acted in the fifth book and I find this very disconcerting. Especially when you make draco a more willing and more predominate force in helping harry than ron. And if you read the ending of the fifth book, you would see why this is higly illogical (people do not go from wanting to kill someone one second, to wanting to help them the next). Your representation of the other characters, particularly hermione is very good. Although, I think that Zachery Smith would be more likely to be against harry than Justin F-Fletcly, but this is a minor point. Overall, pretty good job. In depth descriptions would greatly enhance this story.
This story is pretty well done. Not neccessarily original in nature, but a somewhat entertaining story nonetheless. What hinders this story is the terrible, post-fifth book fanfiction representation of ron. Your characterization does not take into consideration the way ron acted in the fifth book and I find this very disconcerting. Especially when you make draco a more willing and more predominate force in helping harry than ron. And if you read the ending of the fifth book, you would see why this is higly illogical (people do not go from wanting to kill someone one second, to wanting to help them the next). Your representation of the other characters, particularly hermione is very good. Although, I think that Zachery Smith would be more likely to be against harry than Justin F-Fletcly, but this is a minor point. Overall, pretty good job. In depth descriptions would greatly enhance this story.
5/25/2004 c3 
7Leah6
wow thats great! i would never have been able to think of something like that! i hope harry will be okay. love this! -leah
7Leah6wow thats great! i would never have been able to think of something like that! i hope harry will be okay. love this! -leah
5/19/2004 c2 Serena24
I want the sequel. You said it would be once or twice a week and it's already two weeks by now !
I hope it will be a good chapter. By the way, thanks for the explanations in the summary, I've found out how Harry will escape : with his friends help. I hope they do realise they won't ever be able to return to Hogwards after having freed him. Please update quickly, it's driving me crazy (more than Harry who has to stay there)
See you soon I hope (good you accept anonymous reviews, one can send more than one review per chapter, rather cool)
I want the sequel. You said it would be once or twice a week and it's already two weeks by now !
I hope it will be a good chapter. By the way, thanks for the explanations in the summary, I've found out how Harry will escape : with his friends help. I hope they do realise they won't ever be able to return to Hogwards after having freed him. Please update quickly, it's driving me crazy (more than Harry who has to stay there)
See you soon I hope (good you accept anonymous reviews, one can send more than one review per chapter, rather cool)
5/9/2004 c2 Drake Smythe
Wow, this is a great story so far. I wonder . . . Is this going to turn into a superpowered Harry story in which he comes back kills Voldy and then makes all those who didn't believe in him pay for their mistake? Please Update Soon.
Wow, this is a great story so far. I wonder . . . Is this going to turn into a superpowered Harry story in which he comes back kills Voldy and then makes all those who didn't believe in him pay for their mistake? Please Update Soon.
5/7/2004 c2 7Leah6
hey, sorry it took me so long to review! anyway, i love this story and cant wait until the next chapter. when is it gonna turn h/hr? update soon! -leah
7Leah6hey, sorry it took me so long to review! anyway, i love this story and cant wait until the next chapter. when is it gonna turn h/hr? update soon! -leah
5/6/2004 c2 Kokomo44
i love this story so far! it's awesome... I can't believe dumbledore would do such a thing tho... he makes me so mad... i wonder if it was the ministry who put Harry in Azkaban or if it was Voldemort... well ikeep up the great story!
i love this story so far! it's awesome... I can't believe dumbledore would do such a thing tho... he makes me so mad... i wonder if it was the ministry who put Harry in Azkaban or if it was Voldemort... well ikeep up the great story!
5/5/2004 c2 Shadow Pals
Good! But I wanna see a massive battle scene here...
Good! But I wanna see a massive battle scene here...