for Baker Street Irregulars12/8/2018 c5 Guest
I'm sorry the story died with your friend but I totally understand. Maybe someday your soul will relax and you'll be able to complete the story in his honor.
I'm sorry the story died with your friend but I totally understand. Maybe someday your soul will relax and you'll be able to complete the story in his honor.
8/26/2018 c5 Guest
Recreate this story as your friend's legacy. Ditch the "holy grail" idea (it's just too far-fetched and would require too much side info, etc. to realistically work) and show Harry's vengeance against Dumbledore, The Order, The Minister, and The Tom. Now that the pain isn't quite as fresh or as stabby, maybe just maybe it's time to finish this legacy to your friend.
Recreate this story as your friend's legacy. Ditch the "holy grail" idea (it's just too far-fetched and would require too much side info, etc. to realistically work) and show Harry's vengeance against Dumbledore, The Order, The Minister, and The Tom. Now that the pain isn't quite as fresh or as stabby, maybe just maybe it's time to finish this legacy to your friend.
8/26/2018 c1 Guest
Nah, Dumblefuck has own game-plan, uses people then tosses them away, and to hell with anyone who dares to have their own thoughts and who don't follow his instructions to the letter. He wants sycophants and ass-kissers. Of course he didn't bother believing Harry - unless Harry is useful to him, he couldn't care less about him.
Nah, Dumblefuck has own game-plan, uses people then tosses them away, and to hell with anyone who dares to have their own thoughts and who don't follow his instructions to the letter. He wants sycophants and ass-kissers. Of course he didn't bother believing Harry - unless Harry is useful to him, he couldn't care less about him.
12/22/2017 c5 
8HarryPotterFangirl85
Dang this started out as an awesome sounding story, too. Sorry to hear about your friend. I’m also sorry to be missing out on the amazingness that this story could have been.
8HarryPotterFangirl85Dang this started out as an awesome sounding story, too. Sorry to hear about your friend. I’m also sorry to be missing out on the amazingness that this story could have been.
3/12/2017 c4 SortingHat
BTW: Bernie Sanders just admitted to spraying by calling for an *eco friendly* reform of toxic chemicals being used for solar management.
I call BS on that because you either spray or don't spray. There is no inbetween. Sorry folks but those doing it are dillusional.
BTW: Bernie Sanders just admitted to spraying by calling for an *eco friendly* reform of toxic chemicals being used for solar management.
I call BS on that because you either spray or don't spray. There is no inbetween. Sorry folks but those doing it are dillusional.
3/12/2017 c5 SortingHat
2012. Your not alone in the experience.
I'm not surprised.
Look up at the skies and see those squiggly lines forming sometimes X and checkerboard patterns?
Those are NOT contrails forming.
I am a plane spotter and have watched planes my whole life and know quite well the difference between contrails and chemtrails and these are quite ugly sometimes flying in a drunk pattern or doing *U-turns* from directions not normal and not military aerial exercises either.
Contrails form only under certain atmospheric conditions while chemtrails happen regardless of temp and humidity and eventually the sun gets blotted out or have a weird rainbow look from the metals in the air bending the light on what is a perfectly clear day with no storms for hundreds of miles.
The only reason it hasn't gotten to the point of killing everybody is likely it's small enough doses and lots and lots of prayer by people who have spiritual connections to heal our earth.
Sometimes like the end times we are in now help from beyond is our only source when mankind has screwed up so much that fixing things may damage it more then leaving it alone
Doctors and clinics are overloaded with weird throat problems/coughing/wheezing and upticks in cancers hitting people who shouldn't have it. Your not alone in it.
2012. Your not alone in the experience.
I'm not surprised.
Look up at the skies and see those squiggly lines forming sometimes X and checkerboard patterns?
Those are NOT contrails forming.
I am a plane spotter and have watched planes my whole life and know quite well the difference between contrails and chemtrails and these are quite ugly sometimes flying in a drunk pattern or doing *U-turns* from directions not normal and not military aerial exercises either.
Contrails form only under certain atmospheric conditions while chemtrails happen regardless of temp and humidity and eventually the sun gets blotted out or have a weird rainbow look from the metals in the air bending the light on what is a perfectly clear day with no storms for hundreds of miles.
The only reason it hasn't gotten to the point of killing everybody is likely it's small enough doses and lots and lots of prayer by people who have spiritual connections to heal our earth.
Sometimes like the end times we are in now help from beyond is our only source when mankind has screwed up so much that fixing things may damage it more then leaving it alone
Doctors and clinics are overloaded with weird throat problems/coughing/wheezing and upticks in cancers hitting people who shouldn't have it. Your not alone in it.
3/12/2017 c2 SortingHat
The good and bad. The premise of the story is good but some of it turns too much into *Dear Abby* not sure if that was your original approach or not.
The good and bad. The premise of the story is good but some of it turns too much into *Dear Abby* not sure if that was your original approach or not.
3/3/2017 c1 Guest
Dumbledore can read minds, though. And he was awfully eager to believe Harry at the end of third year, despite a complete lack of proof.
Dumbledore can read minds, though. And he was awfully eager to believe Harry at the end of third year, despite a complete lack of proof.
1/7/2017 c5 Ice Demon Ranger
This is a fantastic story. I am sorry for your loss. It seem that your friend was your use for this story. I hope that you will one day be able to pick up the threads of it. To finish it in honor of him. Thank you for sharing what you have with us.
This is a fantastic story. I am sorry for your loss. It seem that your friend was your use for this story. I hope that you will one day be able to pick up the threads of it. To finish it in honor of him. Thank you for sharing what you have with us.
11/19/2016 c5 ItsNyx
The story is really good and I hope someday you can continue the story with less pain. I know the feeling of loss especially a person who is much younger than your friend. But to get back to reviewing the story is really good and really well written with good action and lots of detail. I especially love how you make each character work perfectly for this story.
~Roses
(PS I know this is a very late review but I still wish to post this.)
The story is really good and I hope someday you can continue the story with less pain. I know the feeling of loss especially a person who is much younger than your friend. But to get back to reviewing the story is really good and really well written with good action and lots of detail. I especially love how you make each character work perfectly for this story.
~Roses
(PS I know this is a very late review but I still wish to post this.)
10/5/2016 c5 vmcclure2
Well...maybe this is already finished & u don't have to do anymore to it ...unless it, in 10 years time u take a notion to fill it out ...Right! U'll see then...Good story anyway, & a good memorial to what close friends can do when they encourage each other
Well...maybe this is already finished & u don't have to do anymore to it ...unless it, in 10 years time u take a notion to fill it out ...Right! U'll see then...Good story anyway, & a good memorial to what close friends can do when they encourage each other
10/3/2016 c1 vmcclure2
Why did no one think of casting a Priori Incantatum on Harry's wand? Is Dumbledore destined to make the same mistake? Tonks took Harry's wand, isn't she going to think of doing her real duty and perform the spell on Harry's wand? Or is she going to be busy judging to bother with any real investigation?
Why did no one think of casting a Priori Incantatum on Harry's wand? Is Dumbledore destined to make the same mistake? Tonks took Harry's wand, isn't she going to think of doing her real duty and perform the spell on Harry's wand? Or is she going to be busy judging to bother with any real investigation?
4/13/2016 c5 angeltrin1
I'm so sorry for your loss! I have enjoyed what you have written, and completely understand where you're coming from! Thank you for sharing with us what you could!
I'm so sorry for your loss! I have enjoyed what you have written, and completely understand where you're coming from! Thank you for sharing with us what you could!