
10/18/2015 c5
58LBibliophile
While you say you didn't intend for the story to end here, I feel it actually worked out quite well. It is almost like a backstory fic. You showed us how the Baker Street Irregulars formed, then gave us hints of their future adventures. While I would have liked to read more, I find it perfectly acceptable to leave the rest up to our imaginations.
The one thing that I would have liked is for you to have been a bit clearer about what Harry did in Azkaban. Where did his clothes come from (transfiguration, I guess)? How did he manage the effects of the dementors? How did he keep his body in such good condition?

While you say you didn't intend for the story to end here, I feel it actually worked out quite well. It is almost like a backstory fic. You showed us how the Baker Street Irregulars formed, then gave us hints of their future adventures. While I would have liked to read more, I find it perfectly acceptable to leave the rest up to our imaginations.
The one thing that I would have liked is for you to have been a bit clearer about what Harry did in Azkaban. Where did his clothes come from (transfiguration, I guess)? How did he manage the effects of the dementors? How did he keep his body in such good condition?
10/5/2015 c5 BlueKarou79
While this is a good start, and I appreciate your sharing your A/N and final scenes, a story should not be marked complete if it is not, in fact, complete. It is a huge waste of time for someone to get this far and realize that the story will probably never be finished. If you feel you absolutely must label it complete (for whatever reason) at the very lease you should have a big, obvious Author's Note at the beginning of the first chapter giving a heads-up.
While this is a good start, and I appreciate your sharing your A/N and final scenes, a story should not be marked complete if it is not, in fact, complete. It is a huge waste of time for someone to get this far and realize that the story will probably never be finished. If you feel you absolutely must label it complete (for whatever reason) at the very lease you should have a big, obvious Author's Note at the beginning of the first chapter giving a heads-up.
4/7/2015 c1
14Loki Firefox
I'm still giving this a chance because I really like A Bad Death Eater Gone Good but the premise is really shaky.
Even if Dumbledore does not have legilimency, he knew that Sirius was sent to Azkaban wrongly. Dumbledore is human but he won't make the same mistake twice.
And this happened right after Voldemort's return was proved. So even if Fudge is still out to get Harry, the tide of public opinion is now for Harry. He would have had at least had to have given him a trial.
And yeah, in a world where polyjuice and veritaserum exists, how can they blithely send a sixteen year old (not even an adult) to prison without a trial?
I'm going to go read the next chapter but my expectations are pretty low.

I'm still giving this a chance because I really like A Bad Death Eater Gone Good but the premise is really shaky.
Even if Dumbledore does not have legilimency, he knew that Sirius was sent to Azkaban wrongly. Dumbledore is human but he won't make the same mistake twice.
And this happened right after Voldemort's return was proved. So even if Fudge is still out to get Harry, the tide of public opinion is now for Harry. He would have had at least had to have given him a trial.
And yeah, in a world where polyjuice and veritaserum exists, how can they blithely send a sixteen year old (not even an adult) to prison without a trial?
I'm going to go read the next chapter but my expectations are pretty low.
4/2/2015 c4 Guest
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!?
Are u sure u aren't using a little Indiana in here?
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!?
Are u sure u aren't using a little Indiana in here?
9/18/2014 c5
31Amanthya
I understand why you aren't continuing. I'm sorry for your loss; that young man sounds like he was a true friend. I wish to see more of this story, but I won't press for it. I'm happy enough to have read it. It was well done.

I understand why you aren't continuing. I'm sorry for your loss; that young man sounds like he was a true friend. I wish to see more of this story, but I won't press for it. I'm happy enough to have read it. It was well done.
2/12/2014 c5 kitty
I really liked this story. I was sad to see you don't plan to continue it. I think it would be a nice memorial to your friend to finish it. Sorry for your loss.
I really liked this story. I was sad to see you don't plan to continue it. I think it would be a nice memorial to your friend to finish it. Sorry for your loss.
1/13/2014 c5 BillBrink
This story should be marked abandoned, not complete.
This story should be marked abandoned, not complete.
12/2/2013 c1 Guest
Actually, it is widely believed that Dumbledore CAN read minds, using the reverse of occlemency, sorry, I just don't know how to spell that.
Actually, it is widely believed that Dumbledore CAN read minds, using the reverse of occlemency, sorry, I just don't know how to spell that.
11/20/2013 c2 willam and jack and jake
he seem both a little insane and a little sane at the same time
he seem both a little insane and a little sane at the same time