8/9/2018 c1 Guest
I loved this. Such a fun idea and it really fits into the story.
I loved this. Such a fun idea and it really fits into the story.
5/25/2014 c1 hi
Loved your view on Apple. The way you wrote-especially that last bit-made me laugh so hard! :D Keep on writing!
Loved your view on Apple. The way you wrote-especially that last bit-made me laugh so hard! :D Keep on writing!
8/1/2006 c1 NOIP
it was kinda funny that it is in apple's point of view.
i agree with what apple thinks.
it was kinda funny that it is in apple's point of view.
i agree with what apple thinks.
5/29/2006 c1 HI
i liked that
it was in a new perspective!
fun fun!
i liked that
it was in a new perspective!
fun fun!
4/8/2006 c1 Liz
very clever
very clever
3/3/2006 c1 blackolives10
That is one of the best Ella Enchanted fics I've ever read! It was wonderful, I especially loved the ending.
That is one of the best Ella Enchanted fics I've ever read! It was wonderful, I especially loved the ending.
11/28/2004 c1 anonymous
I liked ur story. It was very funny, keep it up.
I liked ur story. It was very funny, keep it up.
6/26/2004 c1 xany
thats nice i'v never really ever read fanfiction that wasint harry potter and that was a good story :)
thats nice i'v never really ever read fanfiction that wasint harry potter and that was a good story :)
6/7/2004 c1 2random eggy
hey ~ well, Congratulations on having my first review ever on FanFic.net ~
I like the way you write from Apple's point of view ~ i always think that putting a centaur just as simple-minded beings is...well, kinda out of my expectation...anywayz, your story is so...well, cute.
hey ~ well, Congratulations on having my first review ever on FanFic.net ~
I like the way you write from Apple's point of view ~ i always think that putting a centaur just as simple-minded beings is...well, kinda out of my expectation...anywayz, your story is so...well, cute.
5/24/2004 c1 Axa
Oh taht was so GOOD! I always disliked the idea of centaurs Ella Enchanted portrayed. Who is simple minded indeed...
Oh taht was so GOOD! I always disliked the idea of centaurs Ella Enchanted portrayed. Who is simple minded indeed...
5/22/2004 c1 Lady Emma
What a cool original story. There was an error I noticed though. It says "Though Her stories, I have begun to hate Olive, Hattie and Olga." It's not that important but You could change the "though" to through. I think that's what you meant. I really like your story so far though.
What a cool original story. There was an error I noticed though. It says "Though Her stories, I have begun to hate Olive, Hattie and Olga." It's not that important but You could change the "though" to through. I think that's what you meant. I really like your story so far though.
5/19/2004 c1 harry is hot
great for a first fic
great for a first fic