
5/7/2009 c4
14cartoonfavs
loved it. poor kit. everthing was on top of him and he couldn't handle it. stress will do that to you.

loved it. poor kit. everthing was on top of him and he couldn't handle it. stress will do that to you.
9/25/2007 c4 toripaige224
I loved this story. It was so cute! I happened to stumble upon Talespin when I was 10 and now I'm 15 and I still love the show! Kit is my fave character! You are a good author! I hope you write more stories!
I loved this story. It was so cute! I happened to stumble upon Talespin when I was 10 and now I'm 15 and I still love the show! Kit is my fave character! You are a good author! I hope you write more stories!
7/19/2006 c4
2Turock
Tee hee! I can tell that German is your major language, because of the way you use "learn". In English, the word "study" is the closest equivalent of the German word "lernen". To say "I must go learn my homework" would be sort of like saying "Ich muss meine Hausaufgaben studieren". Isn't it funny how those words seem to be flip-flopped in our languages! :D
This was a touching story. I like the way you use Talespin characters to emphasize lifelike issues, like kids' sometimes overwhelming desire to please their parents. After all, family issues are a major part of what Talespin is about, and I like how you handle them in this story.

Tee hee! I can tell that German is your major language, because of the way you use "learn". In English, the word "study" is the closest equivalent of the German word "lernen". To say "I must go learn my homework" would be sort of like saying "Ich muss meine Hausaufgaben studieren". Isn't it funny how those words seem to be flip-flopped in our languages! :D
This was a touching story. I like the way you use Talespin characters to emphasize lifelike issues, like kids' sometimes overwhelming desire to please their parents. After all, family issues are a major part of what Talespin is about, and I like how you handle them in this story.
1/5/2005 c4
22spunkiegirl
Oh, that is so sweet. Oh my gosh, my eyes are tearing up...that is so beautiful. Wonderful job.

Oh, that is so sweet. Oh my gosh, my eyes are tearing up...that is so beautiful. Wonderful job.
1/3/2005 c4 BX
Great finish.
Great finish.
9/28/2004 c3 Wiachi
please please please write more! its a great story and you really need to finish it! dont leave me hanging like this! ;-; I love Kit, he's such a cutie... even if he is a bear, lol.
please please please write more! its a great story and you really need to finish it! dont leave me hanging like this! ;-; I love Kit, he's such a cutie... even if he is a bear, lol.
9/23/2004 c3 B.X
Well alright!
Well alright!
9/21/2004 c3 suede
Sort but well written. I hope youll finnish this one day, I do like your writting style.
Sort but well written. I hope youll finnish this one day, I do like your writting style.
8/31/2004 c2
22spunkiegirl
Oh...that last line from Baloo...I LOVE it. I'm glad Kit will survive, you had me worried there!

Oh...that last line from Baloo...I LOVE it. I'm glad Kit will survive, you had me worried there!