
11/28/2004 c2 xX AngelDevil Xx
hey im not rly a steve fan nemore, but i read it neway and i think its a good story. i hope u continue. thats smith guy is mean lol
hey im not rly a steve fan nemore, but i read it neway and i think its a good story. i hope u continue. thats smith guy is mean lol
6/2/2004 c1
16Sheenah267
It's good. I like it. But I think you should make more paragraphes and separate the dialogues, it would be easier to read. Hope you'll continue it soon.
Kepp it up!
~Claire Burnside267

It's good. I like it. But I think you should make more paragraphes and separate the dialogues, it would be easier to read. Hope you'll continue it soon.
Kepp it up!
~Claire Burnside267