3/20/2011 c10 1Damsels
Oh please update I truly fell in love with this story and it'd a shame you havnt finished it or u
Oh please update I truly fell in love with this story and it'd a shame you havnt finished it or u
8/27/2010 c1 Bleu Dragon47
Please continue soon this chapter especially was a huge cliff hanger, not that I want to rush you or anything ^.^
Please continue soon this chapter especially was a huge cliff hanger, not that I want to rush you or anything ^.^
12/31/2009 c10 Lillian Viviene
Wright more, more and more. Thank you. Bye!
Wright more, more and more. Thank you. Bye!
6/25/2009 c10 20Machungwa63
So this is what it felt like for a religious person to watch the DaVinci Code? Like I said, I'm never for the idea that Simba and Nala would betray one another, but I think it's really good how you keep bringing Ron back into it. It's going to be interesting to see how it all plays out.
So this is what it felt like for a religious person to watch the DaVinci Code? Like I said, I'm never for the idea that Simba and Nala would betray one another, but I think it's really good how you keep bringing Ron back into it. It's going to be interesting to see how it all plays out.
6/25/2009 c6 Machungwa63
Still don't think Simba and Nala would ever betray each other, but you did a really nice job with putting Sakari's story into lion terms. I really liked Chapter 5 and the whole Kovu/Sakari incidents. They're fun to watch.
Still don't think Simba and Nala would ever betray each other, but you did a really nice job with putting Sakari's story into lion terms. I really liked Chapter 5 and the whole Kovu/Sakari incidents. They're fun to watch.
6/25/2009 c2 Machungwa63
Just a small thing, you might want to add a horizontal break or something between where Sakari hits the rock and when she is awoken by Rafiki, just so we know that something big has happened/some time has passed.
Just a small thing, you might want to add a horizontal break or something between where Sakari hits the rock and when she is awoken by Rafiki, just so we know that something big has happened/some time has passed.
3/18/2008 c10 26Ole Miss Chick
Awesome chapter. Though I wished Simba believed her. Keep it up. I'm dying to know what happens next
Awesome chapter. Though I wished Simba believed her. Keep it up. I'm dying to know what happens next
3/16/2008 c10 10danielle134
You captured Simba's character really well. And I love the plot. You should update this asap.
You captured Simba's character really well. And I love the plot. You should update this asap.