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for The Legend of Cirrus: The Mana Sword

7/22/2004 c2 Zeon3
Well i enjoyed the original game and so was quite happy to see you converting it to written form.

Its kind of annoying that you have change the name of the mana sword to "celestial sword" or something like that. Are you sure you have to do that?

The only thing i can really think that needs to be improved on is your use of paragraphs.

sort that out and your on to a winner : )

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