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6The Liz
Ha! That was interesting. I guess even in other worlds everyone's the same. Good one, keep going!
6The LizHa! That was interesting. I guess even in other worlds everyone's the same. Good one, keep going!
6/14/2004 c2 23Hououza
Interesting chapter.
Didn't expect that one...so Ranma is going to travel with an alternate Akane...I wonder what will happen if he ever gets back to his own one...
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza
23HououzaInteresting chapter.
Didn't expect that one...so Ranma is going to travel with an alternate Akane...I wonder what will happen if he ever gets back to his own one...
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza
6/14/2004 c2 3Ayanami Rei II
Well, the reason he was transported to another world was rather dull, for a lack of a better word, though the main idea of Ranma going to another world and looking for his way back is also quite common, however with something like Quantum Leap types of story are few and apart as they are a bit hard to make into a great story as a lot of emotional and environmental challenges makes it great.
The spellings, and writing of this 2 chapters so far are good, and you are not rushing the story so it is still in my good books. Keep on writing it and this story may turn out to be one of the best around, who knows but it does has this potential. So I wish you best of luck and may God bless you.
Rei II
3Ayanami Rei IIWell, the reason he was transported to another world was rather dull, for a lack of a better word, though the main idea of Ranma going to another world and looking for his way back is also quite common, however with something like Quantum Leap types of story are few and apart as they are a bit hard to make into a great story as a lot of emotional and environmental challenges makes it great.
The spellings, and writing of this 2 chapters so far are good, and you are not rushing the story so it is still in my good books. Keep on writing it and this story may turn out to be one of the best around, who knows but it does has this potential. So I wish you best of luck and may God bless you.
Rei II
6/11/2004 c1 Nikka
aw.. that was sad. Ranma doesn't DIE, does he? *shakes you vigorously* DOES HE?
aw.. that was sad. Ranma doesn't DIE, does he? *shakes you vigorously* DOES HE?
6/10/2004 c1 6The Liz
Ach! No, Ranma dies? That's so not cool man, so not cool.
Is he ever gonna catch up with Akane? I hope so.
6The LizAch! No, Ranma dies? That's so not cool man, so not cool.
Is he ever gonna catch up with Akane? I hope so.
6/9/2004 c1 34TetsuoTsubushi
poor guy. Girl leaves you and then you get hit by a car. that's the epitome of life sucking.
34TetsuoTsubushipoor guy. Girl leaves you and then you get hit by a car. that's the epitome of life sucking.
6/9/2004 c1 hdfsg
Very interesting Start of what could be a Very good Story, Keep up the Excellent work Mate!
Very interesting Start of what could be a Very good Story, Keep up the Excellent work Mate!
6/9/2004 c1 agent smith
Hey, this is really intriguing. This is definitly good writing. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Hey, this is really intriguing. This is definitly good writing. Can't wait to see where you take this.
6/8/2004 c1 Guest
Fairly good story!
Please update soon...
Fairly good story!
Please update soon...