for Sweet Loving Hate2/11/2021 c2 Guest
Cute ending
Cute ending
2/21/2018 c2 Astral Dragon Spirit
Love how it all worked out in the end. When everyone was confused if they were arguing or agreeing was so funny.
Love how it all worked out in the end. When everyone was confused if they were arguing or agreeing was so funny.
7/7/2017 c1 Zophanie
I think this is the third time I've read this story and I still love it! Thank you!
I think this is the third time I've read this story and I still love it! Thank you!
8/15/2015 c2 Guest
Lindo y caliente me gusto
Lindo y caliente me gusto
1/21/2013 c1 
3bloodpurple and murkpond green
Several points; All exceptional -
The structure between your conversations, the characters actions and tones - brilliant.
Your pace is excellent, I particularly like the flow, combined with the desciptions and the inner monolouges - personal choice below.
" So do I", Serena confessed, daring to meet his eyes. She sighed, " I can't do anything normal, can I? Right then, Jerk, I'm off to school and you!"
3bloodpurple and murkpond greenSeveral points; All exceptional -
The structure between your conversations, the characters actions and tones - brilliant.
Your pace is excellent, I particularly like the flow, combined with the desciptions and the inner monolouges - personal choice below.
" So do I", Serena confessed, daring to meet his eyes. She sighed, " I can't do anything normal, can I? Right then, Jerk, I'm off to school and you!"
12/19/2012 c1 Guest
No relationship to the story, but Darien's last name, since your using the English dub version, is Shields.
No relationship to the story, but Darien's last name, since your using the English dub version, is Shields.
7/14/2011 c2 4MoxyGirl
I love a good fight too...esp when the end results can be so...satisfying. ; P
tokyofish
4MoxyGirlI love a good fight too...esp when the end results can be so...satisfying. ; P
tokyofish
2/7/2011 c2 ARABELLA VIOLETTA
I think this is one of the first story's that put to question that Sere dose not look like her family.
I think they have sore throats for sure after all the shouting you put them thrum :-)))))))))))))
Liked it but then again what else is new ;-P
I think this is one of the first story's that put to question that Sere dose not look like her family.
I think they have sore throats for sure after all the shouting you put them thrum :-)))))))))))))
Liked it but then again what else is new ;-P
6/11/2005 c2 Allanna-San
there not all this lemony? aww :( lol oh well it was still good..and DO look forword to other stories...this 1 was really good...I dislike fan fics with Rini in it...she just comlicates things...lol...ur a good writer...I love ur fanfics..very orginal...and funky...keep writing *more lemon* (but only if you want)
there not all this lemony? aww :( lol oh well it was still good..and DO look forword to other stories...this 1 was really good...I dislike fan fics with Rini in it...she just comlicates things...lol...ur a good writer...I love ur fanfics..very orginal...and funky...keep writing *more lemon* (but only if you want)
6/3/2005 c2 Dragon85
This is a strange fanfic, but i love the mood of Mamochan and Usa to explicate their relationship. My congratulations again ;-)
-uh i'm italian but i use original names... i prefer 'em ^_^ -
This is a strange fanfic, but i love the mood of Mamochan and Usa to explicate their relationship. My congratulations again ;-)
-uh i'm italian but i use original names... i prefer 'em ^_^ -