for Void Contract9/27/2019 c8 ballinore
I realize this is about a decade and a half late, but hey, I found your story! And a fine story it is. I'm not familiar with 3 x 3, but between what you explained and what was implied, never felt lost. Your writing is excellent, and you've delved into some interesting stuff. The focus on aura's is genius, and opens so many possibilities!
What's most impressive, is how well it fits with canon. Better differentiating aura from ki is nothing new for Akane or Ryoga, but still fits their anger and depression well. But it's especially perfect for Soun, who's Aura would be Bluster, or perhaps Bluff. Finally, it makes sense how a paper tiger technique like his Demon Head repeatedly cows active martial artists who are otherwise brave.
Anyways, great story. Thanks for sharing, and for leaving it up after you were done. It's pretty awesome that I can find and enjoy this so many years later.
I realize this is about a decade and a half late, but hey, I found your story! And a fine story it is. I'm not familiar with 3 x 3, but between what you explained and what was implied, never felt lost. Your writing is excellent, and you've delved into some interesting stuff. The focus on aura's is genius, and opens so many possibilities!
What's most impressive, is how well it fits with canon. Better differentiating aura from ki is nothing new for Akane or Ryoga, but still fits their anger and depression well. But it's especially perfect for Soun, who's Aura would be Bluster, or perhaps Bluff. Finally, it makes sense how a paper tiger technique like his Demon Head repeatedly cows active martial artists who are otherwise brave.
Anyways, great story. Thanks for sharing, and for leaving it up after you were done. It's pretty awesome that I can find and enjoy this so many years later.
7/15/2016 c8 Guest
Thank you for letting me submerge myself in the world you created.
Thank you for letting me submerge myself in the world you created.
7/15/2016 c7 Guest
Those quotes by Genma are quite insightful.
Thank you for sharing them.
Those quotes by Genma are quite insightful.
Thank you for sharing them.
7/15/2016 c6 Guest
After the exploding heart strike thingy I finally figured out why that name Pai Mei sounded so familiar.
Kill Bill I shout in my mind.
Less than half a minute later I read the authors note and I can only think about how obvious it was and how dumb I am for not noticing earlier.
XD
Thank you for sharing this.
After the exploding heart strike thingy I finally figured out why that name Pai Mei sounded so familiar.
Kill Bill I shout in my mind.
Less than half a minute later I read the authors note and I can only think about how obvious it was and how dumb I am for not noticing earlier.
XD
Thank you for sharing this.
7/15/2016 c1 Guest
Can I stop giggling uncontrollably now?
NO
let's read the next chapter.
*Giggle*
...
*Giggle*
Oh and thank you for writing this.
Can I stop giggling uncontrollably now?
NO
let's read the next chapter.
*Giggle*
...
*Giggle*
Oh and thank you for writing this.
1/30/2010 c8 aEROTH
DUDE! Please Update! : ) 10/10
DUDE! Please Update! : ) 10/10
12/5/2009 c8 
2god of stuff
Very interesting. I found i was unable to stop reading the story once i got started. Ranma and Shiina's interaction is enjoyable and I like how the story is presented in first person POV. This is the best Ranma/3x3eyes cross i have come across. I just wish you would update this sometime soon. Its been 5 years already.
2god of stuffVery interesting. I found i was unable to stop reading the story once i got started. Ranma and Shiina's interaction is enjoyable and I like how the story is presented in first person POV. This is the best Ranma/3x3eyes cross i have come across. I just wish you would update this sometime soon. Its been 5 years already.
5/19/2007 c8 TegwenielWestwind
absolutely gorgeous story! I'm going to read this many many times. I hope you find inspiration to write more in between chapters of EA!
absolutely gorgeous story! I'm going to read this many many times. I hope you find inspiration to write more in between chapters of EA!
10/17/2006 c8 Jace
...Makichi?...Okay, I haven't heard Makoto have that nickname yet, but still...
So Ranma's her old sepai? I wonder if he'll be passing through Minato-ku sometime...
...Makichi?...Okay, I haven't heard Makoto have that nickname yet, but still...
So Ranma's her old sepai? I wonder if he'll be passing through Minato-ku sometime...
9/9/2006 c8 16Black Dragon6
This is a very interesting story, although I'm totally unfamiliar with whatever series you're crossing Ranma with (she's not an original character, is she?)
The way you juggle Ranma's emotions and work your way through his relationship with Shiina is wonderfully done, and while it isn't strictly canon (Ranma's hardly ever looked twice at a girl in the series), the way you represent him struggling with his libido is equally masterful.
The scene with the MiB was strange. You'd think they'd want to capture Ranma right away, or keep a watch on Genma for his return.
Oh well. At least Ranma's using guns. Guns are cool.
16Black Dragon6This is a very interesting story, although I'm totally unfamiliar with whatever series you're crossing Ranma with (she's not an original character, is she?)
The way you juggle Ranma's emotions and work your way through his relationship with Shiina is wonderfully done, and while it isn't strictly canon (Ranma's hardly ever looked twice at a girl in the series), the way you represent him struggling with his libido is equally masterful.
The scene with the MiB was strange. You'd think they'd want to capture Ranma right away, or keep a watch on Genma for his return.
Oh well. At least Ranma's using guns. Guns are cool.
4/26/2006 c7 21Lerris
Overall the writing and story is quite good. The always in the moment first person viewpoint takes a bit of getting used to though.
21LerrisOverall the writing and story is quite good. The always in the moment first person viewpoint takes a bit of getting used to though.
1/23/2006 c8 covered in blood'n gore
you know if youre going to put ranma back on track to the Tendo Dojo you can just get him flashed so he forgets everything, even his own strenght so when he fights Saffron thats where he gets his extra power. Then Shiina can come along or he can get his memeries back by a technique or magic or something and then go on from there.
you know if youre going to put ranma back on track to the Tendo Dojo you can just get him flashed so he forgets everything, even his own strenght so when he fights Saffron thats where he gets his extra power. Then Shiina can come along or he can get his memeries back by a technique or magic or something and then go on from there.