for Seven Years of Marauding8/5/2005 c8 Jaco Be Nimble
i'm sorry, but when i read the name 'Nathaniel Nott' i had to do a double take as i had read 'Nathaniel Snott' and sat in this comfy little chair laughin the glasses off my face...really pathetic...but yeah. such an easy mis-read that i think that character was given that name for that purpose. when are people going to notice that they have no things to write with? THAT should be a trick and a half 'cause doesnt 'all parchment in hogwarts' cover diaries as well?
i'm sorry, but when i read the name 'Nathaniel Nott' i had to do a double take as i had read 'Nathaniel Snott' and sat in this comfy little chair laughin the glasses off my face...really pathetic...but yeah. such an easy mis-read that i think that character was given that name for that purpose. when are people going to notice that they have no things to write with? THAT should be a trick and a half 'cause doesnt 'all parchment in hogwarts' cover diaries as well?
8/5/2005 c2 Jaco Be Nimble
umm...the site where the authors are going that have been kicked off what is it? i tried the link in your bio but it dint make any sense at all...oh and what is scrubs?
BRILLIANT MATE.
EVERYTHING.
umm...the site where the authors are going that have been kicked off what is it? i tried the link in your bio but it dint make any sense at all...oh and what is scrubs?
BRILLIANT MATE.
EVERYTHING.
8/5/2005 c1 Jaco Be Nimble
I. LOVE. IT.
i give u ramen. inuyasha thing...
YOU'VE READ THE TAMORA PIERCE BOOKS?HONESTLY?*hugs* i was wondering when i might even HEAR of somebody hveing ever read them...neal=rules
not what this is supposed to be about though...but i do guve you starberries for reading those wonderful bits of literature.
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THE MARAUDERS!is this seriously your FIRST fic about them? well its bloody figging brilliant.
I. LOVE. IT.
i give u ramen. inuyasha thing...
YOU'VE READ THE TAMORA PIERCE BOOKS?HONESTLY?*hugs* i was wondering when i might even HEAR of somebody hveing ever read them...neal=rules
not what this is supposed to be about though...but i do guve you starberries for reading those wonderful bits of literature.
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THE MARAUDERS!is this seriously your FIRST fic about them? well its bloody figging brilliant.
7/27/2005 c3 highlandhottie
I like the layout of your story. Some people like REALLY REALLY long chapters but I like that there not to long and I don't get a headche by looking to see how much to read. Great job and start.
I like the layout of your story. Some people like REALLY REALLY long chapters but I like that there not to long and I don't get a headche by looking to see how much to read. Great job and start.
7/24/2005 c29 Kathryn Rose
Yes. I must say I do love this story to bits. More pretty please. -bats eyelashes-
Yes. I must say I do love this story to bits. More pretty please. -bats eyelashes-
7/23/2005 c29 
1Llyana
Hello! Wow, i just finished your whole story so far! I'm very proud of myself! It really is fantastic - I love all your characterisations they're perfect! And it's good how you haven't made Lily the 'shy goody-goody' type. You are also an incredibly funny person, i've chuckled out loud several times! I expect you'd like some constructive criticism but I really can't think of any, so maybe you should write some more! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, please update soon! xx Llyana xx P.S Sorry about the over-use of exclamation marks, I'm in a sleep deprived state of hyper-activity at the moment!
1LlyanaHello! Wow, i just finished your whole story so far! I'm very proud of myself! It really is fantastic - I love all your characterisations they're perfect! And it's good how you haven't made Lily the 'shy goody-goody' type. You are also an incredibly funny person, i've chuckled out loud several times! I expect you'd like some constructive criticism but I really can't think of any, so maybe you should write some more! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, please update soon! xx Llyana xx P.S Sorry about the over-use of exclamation marks, I'm in a sleep deprived state of hyper-activity at the moment!
7/23/2005 c29 130x se
(sob) I got to the end... Well, it's an excellent story, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^_^
Its so god...!
130x se(sob) I got to the end... Well, it's an excellent story, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^_^
Its so god...!
7/23/2005 c29 ThelovelyladyLily
*rolls on the floor laughing* I don't think you understood, his name IS Remmy! And yes, you should be murdered for not updating for so long, but I'll let you off seeing as you finally updated.
I have one question, though, it says that no one in Scotland is afflicted with Spattergoit, but isn't Hogwarts in Scotland? Radcliffe, eh? Is that a pun I sense? Anyway, to the chapter. My favourite part of the chapter was this:
While Radcliffe enthusiastically announced the members of the Hufflepuff Quidditch team (he rambled on about how he thought one of the Chasers fancied him for a good three minutes before McGonagall had the sense to tug the megaphone away from him and finish the commentary herself), Riona turned a critical eye on her teammates and barked last minute instructions at them.
“Black, remember to concentrate on your position in front of the hoops. Sometimes you’re drifting to the left.” Sirius nodded. “Chasers, keep that Hawkshead Attacking Formation in mind; an opportunity might present itself.” Aubri, Shev, and James nodded vigorously. “Addison, Meadows,” Riona turned to her two Beaters, a wry grin on her face. “Kill them.”
It was funny. I liked this part, too: Everyone except Lily who, oblivious to the silence around her, bellowed, “Potter, if you don’t get this next goal, I’m going to kick your arse!” Everyone turned to stare at her as her voice echoed across the silent pitch. Lily turned bright red and attempted to hide beneath her seat. Meanwhile, James heard Lily’s bellow and stopped in midair, nearly dropping the Quaffle. Was that Lily Evans? And was she cheering him on in a twisted, life-threatening sort of way? Odd.
"Odd" is my favourite word, for reasons I am oblivious to. Anyway, I liked this chapter, update soon!
*rolls on the floor laughing* I don't think you understood, his name IS Remmy! And yes, you should be murdered for not updating for so long, but I'll let you off seeing as you finally updated.
I have one question, though, it says that no one in Scotland is afflicted with Spattergoit, but isn't Hogwarts in Scotland? Radcliffe, eh? Is that a pun I sense? Anyway, to the chapter. My favourite part of the chapter was this:
While Radcliffe enthusiastically announced the members of the Hufflepuff Quidditch team (he rambled on about how he thought one of the Chasers fancied him for a good three minutes before McGonagall had the sense to tug the megaphone away from him and finish the commentary herself), Riona turned a critical eye on her teammates and barked last minute instructions at them.
“Black, remember to concentrate on your position in front of the hoops. Sometimes you’re drifting to the left.” Sirius nodded. “Chasers, keep that Hawkshead Attacking Formation in mind; an opportunity might present itself.” Aubri, Shev, and James nodded vigorously. “Addison, Meadows,” Riona turned to her two Beaters, a wry grin on her face. “Kill them.”
It was funny. I liked this part, too: Everyone except Lily who, oblivious to the silence around her, bellowed, “Potter, if you don’t get this next goal, I’m going to kick your arse!” Everyone turned to stare at her as her voice echoed across the silent pitch. Lily turned bright red and attempted to hide beneath her seat. Meanwhile, James heard Lily’s bellow and stopped in midair, nearly dropping the Quaffle. Was that Lily Evans? And was she cheering him on in a twisted, life-threatening sort of way? Odd.
"Odd" is my favourite word, for reasons I am oblivious to. Anyway, I liked this chapter, update soon!
7/22/2005 c29 Guest
Oh hey, the hufflepuff seeker was just looks out for Bella! He would have crashed into her otherwise!
Oh hey, the hufflepuff seeker was just looks out for Bella! He would have crashed into her otherwise!
7/21/2005 c29 Harry Lvr
Well, dunno about total forgiveness...but partially, yes. Just because it was quidditch though. I swear, if the rest of the HP books were horrible, I'd read them just for the quidditch. Anyway, hope you've cleared up all the rotten fruit, and hope u'll update soon cause I've got plenty left to throw ova there (my shotputs getting very good...all the way to America! Acutally, one of my friends is going back to the USA next week...might delegate it to her :)) Anyway, update soon! coughorelsecough
Well, dunno about total forgiveness...but partially, yes. Just because it was quidditch though. I swear, if the rest of the HP books were horrible, I'd read them just for the quidditch. Anyway, hope you've cleared up all the rotten fruit, and hope u'll update soon cause I've got plenty left to throw ova there (my shotputs getting very good...all the way to America! Acutally, one of my friends is going back to the USA next week...might delegate it to her :)) Anyway, update soon! coughorelsecough
7/20/2005 c29 2EmmyTim
GO RIONA! haha priceless comment made by miss evens , i must admit. Th quidditch action was great! question though...how'd you come up wit the name spattergroit/ its a pretty random word.
huggles]
emily
2EmmyTimGO RIONA! haha priceless comment made by miss evens , i must admit. Th quidditch action was great! question though...how'd you come up wit the name spattergroit/ its a pretty random word.
huggles]
emily
7/3/2005 c14 15TonksIsMyHero
This is so adorable! Remus seems a little meaner than he should be, though. But I guess he'll mature as time goes on, yes? Well done overall!
15TonksIsMyHeroThis is so adorable! Remus seems a little meaner than he should be, though. But I guess he'll mature as time goes on, yes? Well done overall!