for Harry Potter & the Enigma of the Foreign Matrices9/29/2005 c1 
2The Lost Laurelezz
hey. thanks for the review, I try to keep those things you said to me in my mind... I write in a hurry, so that's why I got so many mistakes... :) and to tell you the truth, I started to read Naruto some time ago, and I'm little absent-minded... that's why I forgot it was the normal bunshin no jutsu that Naruto had problems with... =) I also have problems with remembering some names... but thanks anyways for the review - please, if you read my story anymore, then please tell me again if there's any mistakes or something... oh, and I read this story, and I think it's good =)
2The Lost Laurelezzhey. thanks for the review, I try to keep those things you said to me in my mind... I write in a hurry, so that's why I got so many mistakes... :) and to tell you the truth, I started to read Naruto some time ago, and I'm little absent-minded... that's why I forgot it was the normal bunshin no jutsu that Naruto had problems with... =) I also have problems with remembering some names... but thanks anyways for the review - please, if you read my story anymore, then please tell me again if there's any mistakes or something... oh, and I read this story, and I think it's good =)
10/16/2004 c6 2Ninjamelon
At a loss for words...very interesting, different..um, good! lol. I enjoyed it!
2NinjamelonAt a loss for words...very interesting, different..um, good! lol. I enjoyed it!
8/28/2004 c1 43Josef Von Perriwinkle
Ok... you skimmed through it for me at skool, but now that I read it... I can say that tis really very good :P Well written, and you've kept all the characters IC. GOOD JOB! XD
43Josef Von PerriwinkleOk... you skimmed through it for me at skool, but now that I read it... I can say that tis really very good :P Well written, and you've kept all the characters IC. GOOD JOB! XD
8/26/2004 c1 Laughing her ass off
I remember in the Yu-Gi-Oh! section there is a fic for the best Mary-Sue's, and each chapter supports the making fun of, and degrading of each and every one of them... Did this chick come from there?
I remember in the Yu-Gi-Oh! section there is a fic for the best Mary-Sue's, and each chapter supports the making fun of, and degrading of each and every one of them... Did this chick come from there?
7/19/2004 c5 10MyDogAteMyPenname
OH MY GAH. (like Jessica Simpson hehe)
OH MY GAH. That was great.
Bah, I hope you don't listen to those people who yell about the evil-ness of Mary Sue's to you. Because.. I don't really think Katrina is one.
That whole thing between Hermione and Katrina was great too. No one really breaks up the trio much. At least in the stuff I read.
SO.
CONTINUE!
10MyDogAteMyPennameOH MY GAH. (like Jessica Simpson hehe)
OH MY GAH. That was great.
Bah, I hope you don't listen to those people who yell about the evil-ness of Mary Sue's to you. Because.. I don't really think Katrina is one.
That whole thing between Hermione and Katrina was great too. No one really breaks up the trio much. At least in the stuff I read.
SO.
CONTINUE!
6/28/2004 c1 glyph
This is a parody, right? You wouldn't write a character that is such an over-the-top cliche of a Mary Sue unless the readers are *supposed* to laugh at her? You did a good job of it!
This is a parody, right? You wouldn't write a character that is such an over-the-top cliche of a Mary Sue unless the readers are *supposed* to laugh at her? You did a good job of it!
6/28/2004 c1 cool
Coming of age's at 17!But excellent story!
Coming of age's at 17!But excellent story!