for Boys Will Be Boys5/2/2008 c15 k4w4iin3k0
LOL. love the story. kind of hate the fact that kaiba's ex-barbie is my real name though xD
LOL. love the story. kind of hate the fact that kaiba's ex-barbie is my real name though xD
10/13/2004 c1 0o
Smells suspiciously of Mary Sue. Meep.
Smells suspiciously of Mary Sue. Meep.
9/20/2004 c19 
10twilight eyes 8120
I finally managed to read your story completely! To heck with my chores. It was good...I enjoyed your development of Lily. I hatd that Emily died, but it did serve a dramatic purpose and it worked. Kaiba was a bit sweet in your story, but you did pull him back on track. I kinda like the way you had him...confused and caring. Turmoil is a good thing when it comes to that man. Anyway, give yourself credit I really liked it...hours have passed since I started reading it, couldn't stop til I was done ya know?
10twilight eyes 8120I finally managed to read your story completely! To heck with my chores. It was good...I enjoyed your development of Lily. I hatd that Emily died, but it did serve a dramatic purpose and it worked. Kaiba was a bit sweet in your story, but you did pull him back on track. I kinda like the way you had him...confused and caring. Turmoil is a good thing when it comes to that man. Anyway, give yourself credit I really liked it...hours have passed since I started reading it, couldn't stop til I was done ya know?
8/13/2004 c16 5xXSaberXx
WOOTNESS!
another specatcular chapter, but it LEAVES ME HANGING! O_o *runs in circlings screaming CHEESE*
YYP: Shes on sugar. _
5xXSaberXxWOOTNESS!
another specatcular chapter, but it LEAVES ME HANGING! O_o *runs in circlings screaming CHEESE*
YYP: Shes on sugar. _
8/7/2004 c19 yugischic08
I LOVED IT! i thought it was sad though that emily died. i think u should write a sequal. u dont have to or ne thing but i think it would b really good if u made a sequal to this. ^_^
I LOVED IT! i thought it was sad though that emily died. i think u should write a sequal. u dont have to or ne thing but i think it would b really good if u made a sequal to this. ^_^
8/7/2004 c19 tyedyequeen
wow that was one of the best stories that I've read! good job! :D
wow that was one of the best stories that I've read! good job! :D
8/7/2004 c18 tyedyequeen
sad really sorry for lily... she'll move on though. she kinda has 2...
sad really sorry for lily... she'll move on though. she kinda has 2...
8/7/2004 c17 tyedyequeen
that was good. i hope Emily will get used to Kaiba though... Anyway it was great!
that was good. i hope Emily will get used to Kaiba though... Anyway it was great!
8/6/2004 c14 tyedyequeen
wow thats really good. who knew it eould turn out like this...
wow thats really good. who knew it eould turn out like this...
8/6/2004 c19 20The Ninja Who Wanted To Be A Samurai
That was a beautiful story. I love the way that you ended it. Kaiba is a really deep character and I think that you dipicted him well, all throughout the story. Lily was a very deep character too. I love the way that you write it all happy and then just when the reader wants a Cinderella type ending, you shove reality into their faces, very good writing style. You should write more, you have a truly unique talent for it.
20The Ninja Who Wanted To Be A SamuraiThat was a beautiful story. I love the way that you ended it. Kaiba is a really deep character and I think that you dipicted him well, all throughout the story. Lily was a very deep character too. I love the way that you write it all happy and then just when the reader wants a Cinderella type ending, you shove reality into their faces, very good writing style. You should write more, you have a truly unique talent for it.
8/5/2004 c10 tyedyequeen
wow good story ties really well. It's a great chapter don't worry about it it's fine!
wow good story ties really well. It's a great chapter don't worry about it it's fine!
8/5/2004 c6 tyedyequeen
it's me again.this one was funny ( not like the others one wasn't) good job!
it's me again.this one was funny ( not like the others one wasn't) good job!