for Summer with the Arrogant Prat2/17/2015 c22 Guest
Em. I never thought she could be such a bloody devious little thing! She should've learned from the Lily thing.
Em. I never thought she could be such a bloody devious little thing! She should've learned from the Lily thing.
2/16/2015 c12 Guest
I smell jealousy in the air!
I smell jealousy in the air!
2/19/2014 c26 Guest
omg. just wow! i absolutely love this fanfic! pls pls pls write the sequel soon! ima just keep on checking to c if uve started it! just one request can we hv more lily n james drama pls? thnx n keep up the great work! u dunno who xxx
omg. just wow! i absolutely love this fanfic! pls pls pls write the sequel soon! ima just keep on checking to c if uve started it! just one request can we hv more lily n james drama pls? thnx n keep up the great work! u dunno who xxx
11/16/2013 c16 
21thecagedsong
This chapter was horrible to read, we know what just happened, you could've just mentioned the scenes instead of copy and pasting them, waste of a chapter in what is usally a brilliant thought out piece of work
21thecagedsongThis chapter was horrible to read, we know what just happened, you could've just mentioned the scenes instead of copy and pasting them, waste of a chapter in what is usally a brilliant thought out piece of work
12/8/2012 c26 5NoLongerValid2022
LOVE the story! Currently watching Friends, the one where Phoebe dates the diplomat and Ross sleeps with Chloe. Best show ever (tied with NCIS and Merlin)!
5NoLongerValid2022LOVE the story! Currently watching Friends, the one where Phoebe dates the diplomat and Ross sleeps with Chloe. Best show ever (tied with NCIS and Merlin)!
7/1/2012 c16 2they see me rowling
i didn't really get the flash backs...i thought it was really confusing.i really enjoyed the end of this chapter though
2they see me rowlingi didn't really get the flash backs...i thought it was really confusing.i really enjoyed the end of this chapter though
1/22/2012 c1 MG.rsb
liked the idea, but thought james and lily were OOC
i think they both should be a lot more mature than your story makes out,
and James' feelings are a lot deeper than what they seem to be in the story
liked the idea, but thought james and lily were OOC
i think they both should be a lot more mature than your story makes out,
and James' feelings are a lot deeper than what they seem to be in the story
1/16/2012 c9 9L. M. Masquerade
I have read this about 6 times, because good Lily/James beach stories are so rare, I've seen more dodo birds. And I don't mean in pictures, either. Congrats on your awesome work. Why am I reviewing at chapter 9? Because I was too lazy to review at chapter 1 or at the end. So a vague, inaccurate sense of the middle was what I chose. I applaud thee, Miss Elladore. Bravo, bravo! *golf claps* :{D
9L. M. MasqueradeI have read this about 6 times, because good Lily/James beach stories are so rare, I've seen more dodo birds. And I don't mean in pictures, either. Congrats on your awesome work. Why am I reviewing at chapter 9? Because I was too lazy to review at chapter 1 or at the end. So a vague, inaccurate sense of the middle was what I chose. I applaud thee, Miss Elladore. Bravo, bravo! *golf claps* :{D
11/2/2011 c26 HpGinny77
THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVED IT! its not stupid and all abt crap but actually has a plot and stuff. its sooo good.
THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVED IT! its not stupid and all abt crap but actually has a plot and stuff. its sooo good.