for Just the Way You Are7/17/2022 c4 
37tentsubasa
Ugh, this has not been updated in forever, but I really wish we could see what Libby thinks of the new Sheen. I have a feeling they won't suit each other at all. Hope Jimmy can get him back. He should probably start working on a reversal function.
37tentsubasaUgh, this has not been updated in forever, but I really wish we could see what Libby thinks of the new Sheen. I have a feeling they won't suit each other at all. Hope Jimmy can get him back. He should probably start working on a reversal function.
11/5/2020 c4 1Brainzzzaps
I know it's been 15 years since you wrote this and probably wont see this but this story is so good and I wish you would continue it
1BrainzzzapsI know it's been 15 years since you wrote this and probably wont see this but this story is so good and I wish you would continue it
4/18/2013 c4 5alethea.1hazel1blue
Most obviously google-translated Spanish ever xD omg, I was laughing so hard, but is ok, I probably sound the same in Chinese (my foreign language of choice) other that, keep it going, I can't wait to see why ensues:) also, awesome story plot, very original and creative :D
Ale,
P.S. if you need help with your Spanish, I'm just a PM away..:) I'm a native speaker ;)
5alethea.1hazel1blueMost obviously google-translated Spanish ever xD omg, I was laughing so hard, but is ok, I probably sound the same in Chinese (my foreign language of choice) other that, keep it going, I can't wait to see why ensues:) also, awesome story plot, very original and creative :D
Ale,
P.S. if you need help with your Spanish, I'm just a PM away..:) I'm a native speaker ;)
9/5/2012 c4 Lunchboxgirl
Okay i see you have updated this story around 2008 and its 2012, i say this fanfic is really good! U should still continue and/or find a way around that writer's block. Keep it up! :D
Okay i see you have updated this story around 2008 and its 2012, i say this fanfic is really good! U should still continue and/or find a way around that writer's block. Keep it up! :D
7/30/2012 c2 Guest
LOL, the "suddenly interesting napkin holder." Poor Sheen! I can only imagine the disaster about to take place...
LOL, the "suddenly interesting napkin holder." Poor Sheen! I can only imagine the disaster about to take place...
8/7/2011 c4 18Sleeping Kangaroo
Sheen! You didn't have your personality changed, you switched minds with ARTEMIS FOWL! Seriously, that's who Sheen's acting like.
18Sleeping KangarooSheen! You didn't have your personality changed, you switched minds with ARTEMIS FOWL! Seriously, that's who Sheen's acting like.
7/12/2010 c4 DreamaDove93
i've been reading your story and its very well written but the conversation in spanish seems a bit off. did you use an online translator, I speak spanish so I've typed out a more accurate translation. kudos on your story again :D I'm not doing the whole conversation though, just the lines that could be improved :)
"Cuando Quieras Abuela" (anytime grandmother)
"Hay algo mal?" or "Hay un problema?" ( is there a ploblem?)
"no, nada. Porque preguntas?" (no, nothing. why do you ask?)
"Estas actuando diferente hoy. Te sientes bien?" (you seem different today. Are you feeling allright?)
"Si, deberias de comer antes de que se enfrié." (yes, you should eat before it gets cold grandmother)
"Si, si, lo se. Porque actúas tan formal hoy?" (yes, yes I know, why are you so formal today?)
"Pienso que es tiempo de empezar a actuar mas maduro" (I just think its time for me to start acting more mature)
"No te apures para ser un hombre, mijo. Disfruta tu juventud mientras puedes" (dont rush to become a man, my child. enjoy your youuth...)
"Claro, abuela. Hablame cuando termines para que pueda llevar la bandeja a la cocina." (yes call me to blah blah...to the kitchen)
i've been reading your story and its very well written but the conversation in spanish seems a bit off. did you use an online translator, I speak spanish so I've typed out a more accurate translation. kudos on your story again :D I'm not doing the whole conversation though, just the lines that could be improved :)
"Cuando Quieras Abuela" (anytime grandmother)
"Hay algo mal?" or "Hay un problema?" ( is there a ploblem?)
"no, nada. Porque preguntas?" (no, nothing. why do you ask?)
"Estas actuando diferente hoy. Te sientes bien?" (you seem different today. Are you feeling allright?)
"Si, deberias de comer antes de que se enfrié." (yes, you should eat before it gets cold grandmother)
"Si, si, lo se. Porque actúas tan formal hoy?" (yes, yes I know, why are you so formal today?)
"Pienso que es tiempo de empezar a actuar mas maduro" (I just think its time for me to start acting more mature)
"No te apures para ser un hombre, mijo. Disfruta tu juventud mientras puedes" (dont rush to become a man, my child. enjoy your youuth...)
"Claro, abuela. Hablame cuando termines para que pueda llevar la bandeja a la cocina." (yes call me to blah blah...to the kitchen)
4/6/2010 c4 Cielo VII
yay! it changed! lol i love this story so dang much... i really wish the new chapter would come! i love the scene with sheen's family because i always want to see what his home life is like. i think he and his dad are so sweet together on the show lol. nice job! PLEASE update soon, i'm begging you!
yay! it changed! lol i love this story so dang much... i really wish the new chapter would come! i love the scene with sheen's family because i always want to see what his home life is like. i think he and his dad are so sweet together on the show lol. nice job! PLEASE update soon, i'm begging you!