12/6/2009 c5 sskirmish
ok. so i know this is 5 years after this story was updated, but i'm begging-literally begging you to finish this. love the way you're going with this, but you've kinda left me on the edge...thankx and hope this might inspire you to keep writing this fic
ok. so i know this is 5 years after this story was updated, but i'm begging-literally begging you to finish this. love the way you're going with this, but you've kinda left me on the edge...thankx and hope this might inspire you to keep writing this fic
6/8/2006 c5 12Elizabeth Theresa
Okay, kind of wishing this was going to get finished cause I really like the concept, but seeing as that's unlikely let me just say that you did a good job with what you wrote.
Okay, kind of wishing this was going to get finished cause I really like the concept, but seeing as that's unlikely let me just say that you did a good job with what you wrote.
6/8/2006 c3 Elizabeth Theresa
Hm, well I'm hoping that Adam is going to walk out of L'Engle's books and fall in love with me, but I'm doubting it. Good chapter though!
Hm, well I'm hoping that Adam is going to walk out of L'Engle's books and fall in love with me, but I'm doubting it. Good chapter though!
6/8/2006 c2 Elizabeth Theresa
Good chapter, not the "truth" I expected at all. Nice to be surprised every once in a while.
Good chapter, not the "truth" I expected at all. Nice to be surprised every once in a while.
6/8/2006 c1 Elizabeth Theresa
You have a pitiful number of reviews for this story, so even though it's slightly old I'm going to help out the review count. Good first chapter, looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.
You have a pitiful number of reviews for this story, so even though it's slightly old I'm going to help out the review count. Good first chapter, looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.
10/7/2004 c1 4monkey-writer08
This is good so far, but there is flaw in the part where vicky is happy that Adam had kissed her and that's because in Troubling a Star he doesn't kiss her once he kisses her twice! but i do like the plot. I have my own fanfic that takes place after Troubling a Star called Summer in Atlantis. I would be greatful if you would read and review and give me some constructive critisism.
This is good so far, but there is flaw in the part where vicky is happy that Adam had kissed her and that's because in Troubling a Star he doesn't kiss her once he kisses her twice! but i do like the plot. I have my own fanfic that takes place after Troubling a Star called Summer in Atlantis. I would be greatful if you would read and review and give me some constructive critisism.
7/30/2004 c4 sciwriter13
this is brilliant. i demand that you write more now.!
this is brilliant. i demand that you write more now.!
7/29/2004 c4 Madeleine L'engle Fan
YAY! Finally a fanfiction about Vicky and Adam! That makes me super happy! Keep it up! =)
YAY! Finally a fanfiction about Vicky and Adam! That makes me super happy! Keep it up! =)
7/6/2004 c2 4Skeleton Leaves
Please update soon! I absolutly love a ring of endless light and troubling a star but can't find any fanfiction for them. If you know a place where I can find some please let me know. I'd write it myself, but I my computer is evil and doesn't have any of the right formats. Great start by the way. The characters do seem slightly out of character, but otherwise it's fine. I really like it. Please continue soon. Don't make me beg:)
Please update soon! I absolutly love a ring of endless light and troubling a star but can't find any fanfiction for them. If you know a place where I can find some please let me know. I'd write it myself, but I my computer is evil and doesn't have any of the right formats. Great start by the way. The characters do seem slightly out of character, but otherwise it's fine. I really like it. Please continue soon. Don't make me beg:)