for Just Making Sure3/30/2005 c1 DMSS
WOW! That was one of the most brilliant short fic I have ever read! you managed to capture Sirius' personality so good, and his feeling and actions are very well described. It show you put out a lot of thought in the storey, since it's extremely canonic and makes sense. :)
I'll cut with the bullshit and just say I adore you and your writing. They say you are asset for a reason.
WOW! That was one of the most brilliant short fic I have ever read! you managed to capture Sirius' personality so good, and his feeling and actions are very well described. It show you put out a lot of thought in the storey, since it's extremely canonic and makes sense. :)
I'll cut with the bullshit and just say I adore you and your writing. They say you are asset for a reason.
9/5/2004 c1 KayTee
Wonderful. I love it, pity you don't update often.
Wonderful. I love it, pity you don't update often.
7/5/2004 c1 Nina
Wow.
Let me start by saying that you have perfectly captured Sirius' characteristics. The whole story is based on his point of view, and I must admit that it was written exactly in the way I’ve imagined it.
Your vocabulary is absolutely amazing!
I enjoyed reading your story so much, just couldn't stop in the middle (thank god it was short ;) ).
The ending was very powerful, leaving you unbelievably shocked and breath-taken, just like Sirius himself.
The total impression from the fic is astonishing, well done!
Wow.
Let me start by saying that you have perfectly captured Sirius' characteristics. The whole story is based on his point of view, and I must admit that it was written exactly in the way I’ve imagined it.
Your vocabulary is absolutely amazing!
I enjoyed reading your story so much, just couldn't stop in the middle (thank god it was short ;) ).
The ending was very powerful, leaving you unbelievably shocked and breath-taken, just like Sirius himself.
The total impression from the fic is astonishing, well done!
7/5/2004 c1 Nina
Wow.
Let me start by saying that you have perfectly captured Sirius' characteristics. The whole story is based on his point of view, and I must admit that it was written exactly in the way I’ve imagined it.
Your vocabulary is absolutely amazing!
I enjoyed reading your story so much, just couldn't stop in the middle (thank god it was short ;) ).
The ending was very powerful, leaving you unbelievably shocked and breath-taken, just like Sirius himself.
The total impression from the fic is astonishing, well done!
Wow.
Let me start by saying that you have perfectly captured Sirius' characteristics. The whole story is based on his point of view, and I must admit that it was written exactly in the way I’ve imagined it.
Your vocabulary is absolutely amazing!
I enjoyed reading your story so much, just couldn't stop in the middle (thank god it was short ;) ).
The ending was very powerful, leaving you unbelievably shocked and breath-taken, just like Sirius himself.
The total impression from the fic is astonishing, well done!
7/5/2004 c1 Crowley G
Beautiful story, loved your point of view on the events. Very realistic Sirius and it seems to be like what really happened there that night.
Of course you already knew all that and Sirius wiil forever stay a splithead for me ;)
Beautiful story, loved your point of view on the events. Very realistic Sirius and it seems to be like what really happened there that night.
Of course you already knew all that and Sirius wiil forever stay a splithead for me ;)
7/4/2004 c1 unreachable.star
This. Was. Brilliant.
If you weren't female, I'd offer to have your babies.
This. Was. Brilliant.
If you weren't female, I'd offer to have your babies.
7/4/2004 c1 
3Author By Night
Hey. I really liked this - you have Sirius's emotions spot on, and I like how you explained his laughing, saying that it was just to let out emotion. Good theory, and probably the most likely.
May I make a suggestion, though? Instead of using bold, you may want to try and stick with italics - it's a little easier to read that way. Bold isn't bad or anything, but I know I prefer italics, unless the bold is used as a title or something. Just a little suggestion I thought I'd make.
Again, great fanfic! :)
3Author By NightHey. I really liked this - you have Sirius's emotions spot on, and I like how you explained his laughing, saying that it was just to let out emotion. Good theory, and probably the most likely.
May I make a suggestion, though? Instead of using bold, you may want to try and stick with italics - it's a little easier to read that way. Bold isn't bad or anything, but I know I prefer italics, unless the bold is used as a title or something. Just a little suggestion I thought I'd make.
Again, great fanfic! :)