7/9/2004 c3 Amy-Chris
Wow! That was a really interesting chapter! I'm glad that Ron is staying! Please update really soon!
Wow! That was a really interesting chapter! I'm glad that Ron is staying! Please update really soon!
7/9/2004 c3 Amy-Chris
Wow! That was a really interesting chapter! I'm glad that Ron is staying! Please update really soon!
Wow! That was a really interesting chapter! I'm glad that Ron is staying! Please update really soon!
7/8/2004 c2 3siriuslysirius
i hope more comes out about y Ron had to stay hiden all those years and y now he can suddenly come out. hope u update soon!
i hope more comes out about y Ron had to stay hiden all those years and y now he can suddenly come out. hope u update soon!
7/8/2004 c2 15Capheine
o_o I most certainly prefered the first chapter. This chapter seemed too... perfect? You would assume that Harry/Ginny/Hermione would be less accepting that Ron was back (after twelve years of non-existance). But, the first chapter was a good cliff-hanger and you kept the characters in character for most of the chapter.
A beta (reader) is a person who looks over your chapter before you post it to check for grammatical/spelling errors. They also give you feedback on how they like or dislike the chapter and what aspects you might want to think about changing.
o_o I most certainly prefered the first chapter. This chapter seemed too... perfect? You would assume that Harry/Ginny/Hermione would be less accepting that Ron was back (after twelve years of non-existance). But, the first chapter was a good cliff-hanger and you kept the characters in character for most of the chapter.
A beta (reader) is a person who looks over your chapter before you post it to check for grammatical/spelling errors. They also give you feedback on how they like or dislike the chapter and what aspects you might want to think about changing.
7/8/2004 c2 1AmyChris
Haha! Ron's the greatest! Omg this is such a great story! I love it! Please update really soon!
Haha! Ron's the greatest! Omg this is such a great story! I love it! Please update really soon!
7/8/2004 c2 jessica
this is very good i have enjoyed reading it. you should write a few other chapters and keep on continueing on. it's as good as JK Rowling
this is very good i have enjoyed reading it. you should write a few other chapters and keep on continueing on. it's as good as JK Rowling
7/6/2004 c2 NoName
Can't wait till you update
Can't wait till you update
7/6/2004 c1 3siriuslysirius
I was wondering if she was possitive it wasn't ron's voice who'd said Avada Kerdava and that he would someday reappear. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!
I was wondering if she was possitive it wasn't ron's voice who'd said Avada Kerdava and that he would someday reappear. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!
7/6/2004 c1 Ash
Great story so far. Hurry and write more i am dying to find out what happens
Great story so far. Hurry and write more i am dying to find out what happens
7/6/2004 c1 Becky
update soon!
update soon!
7/6/2004 c1 ilikechicken
*gasp* RON? But, it can't be! He's...dead!
Just kidding. Great story, so far! Please update soon!
*gasp* RON? But, it can't be! He's...dead!
Just kidding. Great story, so far! Please update soon!
7/5/2004 c1 2punkbanana13
this is a great story! i love it so! you must update soon. please hudrry, i must see what happens!
~punkbanana13
p.s youre going on all my favorites lists and my author alerts! fab job!
this is a great story! i love it so! you must update soon. please hudrry, i must see what happens!
~punkbanana13
p.s youre going on all my favorites lists and my author alerts! fab job!
7/5/2004 c1 Anna
Hey omg this is great u gotts keep going ron is my total favorite u almost had me crying! and the bloody embarrassing thing is just like ron! lol well awesome job keep up the good work i look forward 2 more!
Hey omg this is great u gotts keep going ron is my total favorite u almost had me crying! and the bloody embarrassing thing is just like ron! lol well awesome job keep up the good work i look forward 2 more!
7/5/2004 c1 2FireboltPrincess
this is a really good story, i like how you keep the characters personalities even though they are out of school! i like it a lot, when do you plan on updating? please do it soon! i want more! thankx!
*FireboltPrincess*
this is a really good story, i like how you keep the characters personalities even though they are out of school! i like it a lot, when do you plan on updating? please do it soon! i want more! thankx!
*FireboltPrincess*