
12/5/2008 c10 xxxShalBrennxxx
love the story, when are you going to put the next one up? i cant wait to readed it... :) :P
love the story, when are you going to put the next one up? i cant wait to readed it... :) :P
7/17/2008 c10 xxxShal abd Brennxxx
Love it, are you going to put the next one up to, i reall really wont to find out what happens nex
Love it, are you going to put the next one up to, i reall really wont to find out what happens nex
5/2/2007 c10 Nats
Hiya, this was a pretty good plotline, but the details about hospital stuff was a bit inaccurate,I just ignored the inaccuracies for the most part as it didn't really change where the story was going but if you want to sort them out I do actually work in Intensive Care so could help? The offer stands for future stories too if you can't be bothered with rehashing this one. Thanks again for an entertaining read :-)
Hiya, this was a pretty good plotline, but the details about hospital stuff was a bit inaccurate,I just ignored the inaccuracies for the most part as it didn't really change where the story was going but if you want to sort them out I do actually work in Intensive Care so could help? The offer stands for future stories too if you can't be bothered with rehashing this one. Thanks again for an entertaining read :-)
12/10/2006 c10 sbfangal
hey great storyy havent got a chance to read it till now
where is the sequel ? is it already posted? come on will u please e mail me to know if you have
thnks
i normally dont leave my mail but i really wanna know what happens next
hey great storyy havent got a chance to read it till now
where is the sequel ? is it already posted? come on will u please e mail me to know if you have
thnks
i normally dont leave my mail but i really wanna know what happens next
4/21/2006 c10
2GrassHopper3
THAT WAS AWESOME! I was near tears at one point it was really intense. I'm going to look for your sequel i better find one! or i'll go crazy!

THAT WAS AWESOME! I was near tears at one point it was really intense. I'm going to look for your sequel i better find one! or i'll go crazy!
1/20/2006 c10 Poohbear
it is a relly good story are you going to write a seguel soon please do
it is a relly good story are you going to write a seguel soon please do
9/1/2005 c1 Tara
Will you be making a sequel to this story...and when will it come out...I want to know what happens to Shalimar after she is poisoned. Thanks.
Will you be making a sequel to this story...and when will it come out...I want to know what happens to Shalimar after she is poisoned. Thanks.
5/14/2005 c10 Kiki-0400
are you done this sequel yet im waiting oh and i love the story
are you done this sequel yet im waiting oh and i love the story
2/26/2005 c9 Kiki
Ok I hav already reviewed the last chapter and may i add I love it
But you hav to tell me some things
A)When are u going to post the sequel or is it posted
B)What is it rated
C)It's genre is still romance rite
I gotta know cuz now im gonna dream about what is gonna happen! Email me
Ok I hav already reviewed the last chapter and may i add I love it
But you hav to tell me some things
A)When are u going to post the sequel or is it posted
B)What is it rated
C)It's genre is still romance rite
I gotta know cuz now im gonna dream about what is gonna happen! Email me
2/26/2005 c10 Kiki
O my god your mean but i love the story!
O my god your mean but i love the story!
1/22/2005 c10 hi
WOW! awsum story!
WOW! awsum story!