for Only By My Dreams SongFic of Non Toxic SR719/5/2004 c1 
2ethereal-bohemian-heathen
nice work, i like the incorporation of the song lyrics. the throw away line - "He decided he'd put a little eyeliner on in case anybody decided to barge in for a quick interview" - seems quite typical of the style of the original film.
2ethereal-bohemian-heathennice work, i like the incorporation of the song lyrics. the throw away line - "He decided he'd put a little eyeliner on in case anybody decided to barge in for a quick interview" - seems quite typical of the style of the original film.
7/19/2004 c1 deactivated11
rather good. A little forumlatic, but good. Few people take the leap of really getting inside Brian/Tommy's head. I liked it.
rather good. A little forumlatic, but good. Few people take the leap of really getting inside Brian/Tommy's head. I liked it.
7/9/2004 c1 32Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'Luv
wow! dude! this is brilliant! no i've not seen the movie, no clue whas its about, but you wrote this in *under* an HOUR! (yes, i timed you! lmao!) and you amaze me. such depth! i wish i wrote this good at 13! lmao... great work!
-
Sincerely,
~*SimbiAni*~
Luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!
http:/groups.yahoo.com/group/simbifanfic
32Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'Luvwow! dude! this is brilliant! no i've not seen the movie, no clue whas its about, but you wrote this in *under* an HOUR! (yes, i timed you! lmao!) and you amaze me. such depth! i wish i wrote this good at 13! lmao... great work!
-
Sincerely,
~*SimbiAni*~
Luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!
http:/groups.yahoo.com/group/simbifanfic