for The 9 months1/25/2008 c2 forwantofanemma
hoping your writers block goes away soon. :P great start to a very promising fic. i love vidanric and mel, dont you? well done. :)
hoping your writers block goes away soon. :P great start to a very promising fic. i love vidanric and mel, dont you? well done. :)
4/25/2007 c2 KKat
OH COME ON!ect.
OH COME ON!ect.
9/7/2006 c2 ReveiwCrown
just keep going!
just keep going!
4/8/2006 c2 music nerd
make it funny! im bored! (not with it, just in general)
please? please write something funny? im dying... bored to tears my foot, im bored to death...
make it funny! im bored! (not with it, just in general)
please? please write something funny? im dying... bored to tears my foot, im bored to death...
1/2/2006 c2 
4Mrs. Dom Masbolle
don't worry we all get it...the story is good so far, i love fluffiness between Mel/Danric...keep it up.
4Mrs. Dom Masbolledon't worry we all get it...the story is good so far, i love fluffiness between Mel/Danric...keep it up.
4/7/2005 c2 dreamsofdarkness
wow i liked the first chapter and do you no the authors name or were i can find the story vidanrics birthday suprise if you can help me that would be great
wow i liked the first chapter and do you no the authors name or were i can find the story vidanrics birthday suprise if you can help me that would be great
2/4/2005 c1 copperflame
There's nothing that really makes me want to keep reading. It just kind of goes on about how she threw up, which isn't very interesting. You might want to start with a scene of more interest; this could fit in later once the readers actually have decided to continue reading.
There's nothing that really makes me want to keep reading. It just kind of goes on about how she threw up, which isn't very interesting. You might want to start with a scene of more interest; this could fit in later once the readers actually have decided to continue reading.
12/28/2004 c1 4Scribbling Death
How about a neutral review? Which would mean, Keep going. (which also means that since it's only the first chapter, I'm not sure if the story is good or bad yet, though it IS leaning toward the good side.)
4Scribbling DeathHow about a neutral review? Which would mean, Keep going. (which also means that since it's only the first chapter, I'm not sure if the story is good or bad yet, though it IS leaning toward the good side.)
10/25/2004 c1 3Twinkling Stars
Sounds like a good story to me! Will you continue? I hope you do! Update soon!
~Kiliana
3Twinkling StarsSounds like a good story to me! Will you continue? I hope you do! Update soon!
~Kiliana
8/3/2004 c1 2Starlight Socrates
Waah... too short. I like it! Please update... I think all the facts are right.
2Starlight SocratesWaah... too short. I like it! Please update... I think all the facts are right.
7/13/2004 c1 8FelSong
It's ok, albeit a little too short for my liking. Typos..Mel "whipped" her mouth. Your info so far should be right, just remember that their first kid is a boy called Alaraec. Read my fic Truly Gifted it's also abt Dan's b'day surprise onwards
8FelSongIt's ok, albeit a little too short for my liking. Typos..Mel "whipped" her mouth. Your info so far should be right, just remember that their first kid is a boy called Alaraec. Read my fic Truly Gifted it's also abt Dan's b'day surprise onwards
7/12/2004 c1 skitz23
good start! just make a new paragraph when someone else speaks, it makes for an easier read. hope you continue!
good start! just make a new paragraph when someone else speaks, it makes for an easier read. hope you continue!