for Harry Potter and the Immortal Bonding8/30/2017 c1 
3The 966
You make proper prophecies. That could've honestly come straight from the books, had I not known that you created it for this story. Damn son.
3The 966You make proper prophecies. That could've honestly come straight from the books, had I not known that you created it for this story. Damn son.
1/22/2017 c3 ShaolinHistory
Shaolin only accepts males, in addition, the males have to be monks.(which means you can't drink, have relationships with women, eat any meat etc.)
Shaolin only accepts males, in addition, the males have to be monks.(which means you can't drink, have relationships with women, eat any meat etc.)
4/30/2012 c6 6Mad about the Boro
It is a good story, I've always liked Harry/Hermione/Ginny fics. There is, however, one incosistency in your story though. You've said that they were away for 3 years, yet you only sent them to 3 realities for 6 months in each. That only accounts for 1 1/2 years. Either that is a typo and you meant they spent a year in each reality; or you need 3 more realities. Other than that it is a great fic. Good luck with the re-write.
6Mad about the BoroIt is a good story, I've always liked Harry/Hermione/Ginny fics. There is, however, one incosistency in your story though. You've said that they were away for 3 years, yet you only sent them to 3 realities for 6 months in each. That only accounts for 1 1/2 years. Either that is a typo and you meant they spent a year in each reality; or you need 3 more realities. Other than that it is a great fic. Good luck with the re-write.
1/22/2012 c6 IamConstantlyBored
Update quickly please! It is good.
Update quickly please! It is good.
4/5/2011 c6 echo27fire
interesting story. When/if you rewrite this story try to not make it so linear.
Also the 'harry dies then has a "dream" where he becomes uber powerful then suddenly reapers when all hope is lost' thins i really boring. That's probably because it's been done so much.
try to do something more original with this.
interesting story. When/if you rewrite this story try to not make it so linear.
Also the 'harry dies then has a "dream" where he becomes uber powerful then suddenly reapers when all hope is lost' thins i really boring. That's probably because it's been done so much.
try to do something more original with this.
9/9/2010 c6 3WhiteElfElder
Enjoying the story so far, up until it was Ron that was pulled into the Darkness. I do not doubt that Cho is one of the other bonded, but I have no idea who the 3rd is as there has been little mention of anyone else...though I suspect it to be Pansy or another of the Slytherin females; unless of course Ron is not really batting for the right team. Sounds like by the time Ron and his bonded are trained up, life in the Wizarding world is going to mean little-to-nothing with the war that will break out.
3WhiteElfElderEnjoying the story so far, up until it was Ron that was pulled into the Darkness. I do not doubt that Cho is one of the other bonded, but I have no idea who the 3rd is as there has been little mention of anyone else...though I suspect it to be Pansy or another of the Slytherin females; unless of course Ron is not really batting for the right team. Sounds like by the time Ron and his bonded are trained up, life in the Wizarding world is going to mean little-to-nothing with the war that will break out.
5/2/2010 c1 noylj
I thought there for a minute that you were writing a good!Bumbles. However, your version is still an SOB with delusions of godhood. Poor Harry.
I thought there for a minute that you were writing a good!Bumbles. However, your version is still an SOB with delusions of godhood. Poor Harry.
4/24/2010 c6 blklover
great story please keep the good work please update as soon as possible can't wait to find out what happen next
great story please keep the good work please update as soon as possible can't wait to find out what happen next
9/15/2009 c6 1Quackpotty
Are you sure that this is just on hold and not, in fact, discontinued? Great story, by the way. I've had fun reading it up to this point in time.
1QuackpottyAre you sure that this is just on hold and not, in fact, discontinued? Great story, by the way. I've had fun reading it up to this point in time.