for Hermione and Ron's First Love Connection8/21/2004 c5 amy
O-M-G YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THE HISTORY OF WRITERS. I LOVE THE IDEA OF RON HERMIONE TOGETHER.IHOPE YOU WILL WRITE A SEQEUEL.PLEASE MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER.
O-M-G YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THE HISTORY OF WRITERS. I LOVE THE IDEA OF RON HERMIONE TOGETHER.IHOPE YOU WILL WRITE A SEQEUEL.PLEASE MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER.
8/14/2004 c5 Dixiegurl
congradulations 5 chapters pleaze make it six
congradulations 5 chapters pleaze make it six
8/13/2004 c2 tiesha
this capter was very good ...but i think that harry should go out with hermione not ron!
this capter was very good ...but i think that harry should go out with hermione not ron!
8/6/2004 c5 Gashlyn2010
Your story was GREAT,FANTASTIC,TERRIFIC! I had been wanting Hermoine and Ron to have a relationship every since the 4th book. But, I just wish that J.K
Your story was GREAT,FANTASTIC,TERRIFIC! I had been wanting Hermoine and Ron to have a relationship every since the 4th book. But, I just wish that J.K
8/5/2004 c5 Vicky
I think these 5 chapters were awesome. I counldn't believe my eyes when I was reading it. YOU'RE A GENIOUS. With your imagination could you write a romantic story between harry and hermione and send it to me? you're great!fantastic!
I think these 5 chapters were awesome. I counldn't believe my eyes when I was reading it. YOU'RE A GENIOUS. With your imagination could you write a romantic story between harry and hermione and send it to me? you're great!fantastic!
8/3/2004 c1 Daimon080
marie! This story is totally cute! I love the Ron/Hermione pairing..it's soo cute! just one suggestion...watch your words usage..i a bit confused sometimes..but other than that it was perfect! a great story! *skips off to read more*
marie! This story is totally cute! I love the Ron/Hermione pairing..it's soo cute! just one suggestion...watch your words usage..i a bit confused sometimes..but other than that it was perfect! a great story! *skips off to read more*
8/1/2004 c5 Elizabeth
The story is really cheesy
The story is really cheesy
7/31/2004 c5 kathyhime85
wait...*barf* jkjkjkjkjk
had to do that. sry, just too tempting
I love romance. It makes me feel all mushy and good inside. I really think that people who read romance novels have bad love lives... I gotta make a surbey about that someplace.
ANYWAY
like the violence in the begging. Every story must have a balance of action, romance, and humor. too much of one makes a very bad story. Unless if it leans towards violence or romance... OK I should lay off the anime and video games AND romance fics for a while, heeheehee.
seriously, its good. 1 grammar mistake.
"Oh…it beautiful." And she hugged her boyfriend very tightly.
its "its" not "it". not as bad as what i once did. Made an entire story in the present tense because i kept on missing the D (im such an idiot)
keep writing!
wait...*barf* jkjkjkjkjk
had to do that. sry, just too tempting
I love romance. It makes me feel all mushy and good inside. I really think that people who read romance novels have bad love lives... I gotta make a surbey about that someplace.
ANYWAY
like the violence in the begging. Every story must have a balance of action, romance, and humor. too much of one makes a very bad story. Unless if it leans towards violence or romance... OK I should lay off the anime and video games AND romance fics for a while, heeheehee.
seriously, its good. 1 grammar mistake.
"Oh…it beautiful." And she hugged her boyfriend very tightly.
its "its" not "it". not as bad as what i once did. Made an entire story in the present tense because i kept on missing the D (im such an idiot)
keep writing!
7/30/2004 c5 
1Blondechic32
Hey marie! I love this story it keeps getting better and better...what does a/n mean? anyways i love this story! lol i think my favorite chapter was 4 although i really liked 5! So what about harry? lol and i think Awe works in the sentance! just to let you know. anyways great work...keep it up!
1Blondechic32Hey marie! I love this story it keeps getting better and better...what does a/n mean? anyways i love this story! lol i think my favorite chapter was 4 although i really liked 5! So what about harry? lol and i think Awe works in the sentance! just to let you know. anyways great work...keep it up!
7/27/2004 c5 Kristi
aww...that chapter was cute...PLEASE update soon!
aww...that chapter was cute...PLEASE update soon!
7/27/2004 c5 43EmD23
Really good chapter, although I expected more chapters before Ron and Hermione made up. Very
good though.
43EmD23Really good chapter, although I expected more chapters before Ron and Hermione made up. Very
good though.
7/27/2004 c5 Amy-Chris
Aw Ron and Hermione are so adorable! good chapter! Please update really really soon!
Aw Ron and Hermione are so adorable! good chapter! Please update really really soon!