for Hermione and Ron's First Love Connection7/18/2004 c2 
3kathyhime85
YAY IT STILL WORKS!
neway, great story. loved it the first time, still love it.keep writing!
3kathyhime85YAY IT STILL WORKS!
neway, great story. loved it the first time, still love it.keep writing!
7/17/2004 c1 inactivenull
I think your interpretation of Ron was excellent. The only minor qualms I have about the fic so far is the use of present tense instead of past tense. It'll make your writing more mature if you stick with past tense. Once Viktor shows up...AHH! Poor Ron! I hope there isn't a fist-fight! Good luck with the following chapters of your fic! (Oh, you might want to "allow" anonymous reviews. You'll receive more reviews that way since many users are too lazy to long in.)
I think your interpretation of Ron was excellent. The only minor qualms I have about the fic so far is the use of present tense instead of past tense. It'll make your writing more mature if you stick with past tense. Once Viktor shows up...AHH! Poor Ron! I hope there isn't a fist-fight! Good luck with the following chapters of your fic! (Oh, you might want to "allow" anonymous reviews. You'll receive more reviews that way since many users are too lazy to long in.)