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for my hero

12/25/2010 c1 monika
OMG Iwright more
8/27/2004 c1 4Sabella Black-Malfoy
hi

if you need a beta, email me & i can help

i love the story, and u have an awesome plot, so keep it up!

(my email's )

keep going!
8/1/2004 c1 Joey
More people would want to read this if the summary wasn't screwed up. Fix the punctuation and capitalization. Titles are supposed to be capitalized.
7/24/2004 c1 flower-child-truth
Once again, it seems like the plot could be interesting, and it's better than last time, but there are still a ton of spelling, punctuation, and grammar mistakes which make it difficult and less enjoyable to read.

I would suggest sending it out to a beta reader and then reposting the revised copy. If you need any help, feel free to e-mail me:

Well, I'm looking forward to an update to see how this story turns out! :O)

-Truth

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