11/13/2010 c1 Bob
I'm glad but your summary is completely misleading. The dinner causes no trouble for them if anything it brings them closer.
I'm glad but your summary is completely misleading. The dinner causes no trouble for them if anything it brings them closer.
8/26/2005 c1 2Franala
Just found this. Awesome story. You wrote Lorelai and Rory very well. I loved it!
Just found this. Awesome story. You wrote Lorelai and Rory very well. I loved it!
1/27/2005 c1 3javalicious
I don't get it, the summary made me feel like Luke going to the parents house was a BAD thing, when it was really good. And then I read the summary again, and it was fine. Oh yeah, btw, GREAT story, lovely characterisation, though the bit about the marriage seemed odd to me. (Though L/L marriages always seem wrong to me, so don't take it personally.)
I don't get it, the summary made me feel like Luke going to the parents house was a BAD thing, when it was really good. And then I read the summary again, and it was fine. Oh yeah, btw, GREAT story, lovely characterisation, though the bit about the marriage seemed odd to me. (Though L/L marriages always seem wrong to me, so don't take it personally.)
10/10/2004 c1 11tulzdavampslayer
haha! awesome. very awesome. sigh... luke/lorelai stuff always make me turn to mush...
haha! awesome. very awesome. sigh... luke/lorelai stuff always make me turn to mush...
9/11/2004 c1 31Erin Kaye Hashet
This is wonderful! Very sweet but not sappy. I hope you write more than just fanfic, and I hope you write more GG fic!
This is wonderful! Very sweet but not sappy. I hope you write more than just fanfic, and I hope you write more GG fic!
9/6/2004 c1 17Icy Flame
Aw this was sweet. I liked the ending, it was a nice touch. This was really great, you kept it realistic but added your own touch. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! *grins* I especially liked Luke's perspective, it was very in-character for him I felt. *grins* *glomps author* *waves*
Later yo,
Icy
Aw this was sweet. I liked the ending, it was a nice touch. This was really great, you kept it realistic but added your own touch. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! *grins* I especially liked Luke's perspective, it was very in-character for him I felt. *grins* *glomps author* *waves*
Later yo,
Icy
8/1/2004 c1 leyla
After reading this, I had to see what other Gilmore Girls stories you'd written, only it seems this is your ONLY gg fic, and I have to tell you this is unacceptable. Writing talent combined with a freakish understanding of the characters is rare, and I'm all girlish with anticipation wondering what you'll have Luke and Lorelai do next. Thanks!
After reading this, I had to see what other Gilmore Girls stories you'd written, only it seems this is your ONLY gg fic, and I have to tell you this is unacceptable. Writing talent combined with a freakish understanding of the characters is rare, and I'm all girlish with anticipation wondering what you'll have Luke and Lorelai do next. Thanks!
7/27/2004 c1 19allthingsholy
I left an anonymous review of this story over at LJ since I don't have an account, but I think it bears repeating that for your first GG/JJ fic, for any GG/JJ fic, this was incredibly good. I loved how you "tied" everything together, and I loved her "I know"s at the end. It was all extremely in-character and perfect.
If your muse suggests more GG fic, please write it as this was great.
I left an anonymous review of this story over at LJ since I don't have an account, but I think it bears repeating that for your first GG/JJ fic, for any GG/JJ fic, this was incredibly good. I loved how you "tied" everything together, and I loved her "I know"s at the end. It was all extremely in-character and perfect.
If your muse suggests more GG fic, please write it as this was great.
7/26/2004 c1 Sarah
Great story! I loved the last line! Fantastic!
Great story! I loved the last line! Fantastic!
7/26/2004 c1 awin
Really, really, really, really, really sweet...
While I'd love a continuation, it was a nice ending. Thanks for sharing.
Really, really, really, really, really sweet...
While I'd love a continuation, it was a nice ending. Thanks for sharing.
7/26/2004 c1 30gilmoregirl1979
NICE!
Awsome
Stupendiferous!
very true to character, this should be an Eppy!
(but it would have been nice to inform Luke he could've worn his "uniform".)
well done!
NICE!
Awsome
Stupendiferous!
very true to character, this should be an Eppy!
(but it would have been nice to inform Luke he could've worn his "uniform".)
well done!
7/26/2004 c1 Sama
Aww, the story is so sweet. I like the parents encounter
Aww, the story is so sweet. I like the parents encounter
7/26/2004 c1 K
I really really liked that. I thought it captured all the characters perfectly.
I really really liked that. I thought it captured all the characters perfectly.