for The final act12/3/2004 c1 Bloodfoxsrevenge
So good, I need to review twice. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!
So good, I need to review twice. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!
7/29/2004 c1 
17CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur
normally, I would say that this was simply amazing, but I do have a question. Could this possibly be some kind of morbid dream warning that Jack gets before they go on this mission? PLEASE!
17CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocurnormally, I would say that this was simply amazing, but I do have a question. Could this possibly be some kind of morbid dream warning that Jack gets before they go on this mission? PLEASE!
7/28/2004 c1 Batumahru
Oh my god! Just like the sweep of a samurai's sword! Swift, final, life forever changed...Excellent! Very nice job. Maybe a chapter 2 or 3 coming? Please? :)
Oh my god! Just like the sweep of a samurai's sword! Swift, final, life forever changed...Excellent! Very nice job. Maybe a chapter 2 or 3 coming? Please? :)
7/28/2004 c1 csl
Wow! Excellent.
Wow! Excellent.