for Take Care with my Heart8/2/2004 c1 
1JasmineHR
Good plot idea so far! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I feel so bad for Catherine. =( There just seems to be some minor spelling errors, for example, "he asks well sitting up" should be "he asks while sitting up". I noticed you used the word "well" instead of "while" a lot. =) Looking forward to reading more! =)
1JasmineHRGood plot idea so far! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I feel so bad for Catherine. =( There just seems to be some minor spelling errors, for example, "he asks well sitting up" should be "he asks while sitting up". I noticed you used the word "well" instead of "while" a lot. =) Looking forward to reading more! =)