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5/25/2007 c1 383Measured
I usually have a strong dislike of first person fics, but somehow this worked very well in capturing their emotions ~ it was really cute I hope you write more for this couple, it's rarer than it should be ;;~! |

(Ivan's phrase in the vs. mode is what convinced me of the ship. lesse, if I remember correctly it was "I'll go anywhere Isaac goes." )
1/1/2005 c1 17McGwee
You are the queen of golden sun shonen-ai fluff. Write more o great one!
10/14/2004 c1 7magical-flyingdragon
heh..cute..anything abut Ivan is cute^^ i love him... cutey cutey cute..*dances*

nice ficcy^^
9/15/2004 c1 deityofsorrow 2lazy2login
Okay, since my e-mail hates yours, I'm doing it this way. .

Anyways, how would you like me to write you your very own birthday fic? Just for you? E-mail back, temm yea or nay, or toss it onto the 'lost minds' box. Anyways, I hope you'll say yes. I've got a great idea.

In relation to this fic, it's good. Love your work, keep it going.
8/28/2004 c1 12Cami of Queenscove
Hehehe... that was so cute! I loved it... I really only read it b/c you wrote it, but er... w/e. I was happily surprised. I don't usually go for anything with Ivan (he always struck me as sorta boring) but this was cute. CUTE! Hehe.

And the Felix tying Piers down the bed imagery...

8/14/2004 c1 13Mr. Peabody Hawke
Excellent! That was so cute! You write the most amazing GS shounen-ai, Azusasan. I'm not even big on this pairing... or, well... I wasn't until I read this. ^_^ I might just have to go find more now! I loved the inner monologues, especially Isaac's. You do wonders with his personality, m'dear, and that's hard since he barely has much of one in the game.

You really have a way with closures- and opening hooks, for that matter. Both your introductory and ending lines were perfect. "- another experiment couldn't hurt," rounds the whole thing off *perfectly*!

And I'm pretty sure you got all the tenses right. I didn't notice any mistakes while I was reading it, and I'm usually pretty sensitive to those things. ::crooked grin:: Keep writing! ~.^
8/10/2004 c1 reviewer
yay!that was enjoyable...write more!
8/7/2004 c1 10Anomalous One
*squeal!* So cute! ^^ I love the plot, and the characters are very un-ooc. (I think I just made up a word...) Darn it, now I'm starting to Luv This Pairing To Death.
8/4/2004 c1 10Avari wind seer
Actually, the present tense actually seemed to work in this fic. I liked it! Isaac and Ivan weren't all lovey-dovey and such...

Anyway, it was cute.
8/4/2004 c1 goodbyeforeverbye
Hi, it's me, Akiko! ^_^; Anywho, I think it was cute, and I'm weird in the fact that I love reading stuff in first person-present tense.

Anyway, yeah. Good stuff.
8/3/2004 c1 9Bandersnatch202
WEHH! I LIKE! You did a very good job with this fic, the personalities came out perfectly, and I LOVE that mental image hehe, felix tying pers down to the bed ^_^! Although I'm more a fan of Garet/Ivan and Felix/Sheba, this was good, I liked it very much. You are definitely a good author and I'm going to go see if you have any other fics right now! Ta!

PS - PLEASE! Write a sequal to this!

Though you don't have to and it wouldn't be needed, I just would like to see more of this story, it was a little short ^_^

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