for The Trail of Leo Wyatt9/14/2018 c1 lizardmomma
Very good job, re-reading it, white lighters aren't always the brightest of people are they?
Very good job, re-reading it, white lighters aren't always the brightest of people are they?
5/26/2018 c1 DB42
You need to edit in scene breaks, for it is hard to read when the dialogue just completely switches characters like it does here.
Metallica? (Does quick google search...) Oh. Right. Nevermind...
You need to edit in scene breaks, for it is hard to read when the dialogue just completely switches characters like it does here.
Metallica? (Does quick google search...) Oh. Right. Nevermind...
9/25/2017 c1 
20jettmanas
Wow, serious conflict right away with the baby! Then a lot of solid character dialogue and emotion. Piper stood out as a good character. The first trip to the trial and consequences were told well. The second trip back- wow, the drama w/Leo and his son trying to do something...
The Circle of Truth and seeing events throughout time were really something. Quite a situation w/Wyatt. And what a resolution. A unique type of ending as well, w/Leo being allowed to return, but w/o powers. And the elders' plotting- nice job!
20jettmanasWow, serious conflict right away with the baby! Then a lot of solid character dialogue and emotion. Piper stood out as a good character. The first trip to the trial and consequences were told well. The second trip back- wow, the drama w/Leo and his son trying to do something...
The Circle of Truth and seeing events throughout time were really something. Quite a situation w/Wyatt. And what a resolution. A unique type of ending as well, w/Leo being allowed to return, but w/o powers. And the elders' plotting- nice job!
5/4/2017 c1 11Loki God of Evil
I can remember watching this episode and thinking 'what the hell?'
Surely as the council of white lighters, they should have been able to watch and observe what was going on...anyway I digress...that damned circle of truth, could it be corrupted? I vaguely remember something similar but it was so long ago now.
The last series, for me, was the most emotional by far. Leo being all powerful, kinda forgetting about his previous charges.
I really enjoyed this chapter, very insightful with good and sad emotions, balanced perfectly. Well written with lots of original elements from the show, we all knew and loved.
Have you thought about making alternative endings for other episodes?
11Loki God of EvilI can remember watching this episode and thinking 'what the hell?'
Surely as the council of white lighters, they should have been able to watch and observe what was going on...anyway I digress...that damned circle of truth, could it be corrupted? I vaguely remember something similar but it was so long ago now.
The last series, for me, was the most emotional by far. Leo being all powerful, kinda forgetting about his previous charges.
I really enjoyed this chapter, very insightful with good and sad emotions, balanced perfectly. Well written with lots of original elements from the show, we all knew and loved.
Have you thought about making alternative endings for other episodes?
6/21/2010 c1 10vamp-gal
Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant!
Amazing!
Loved how you didn't ignore the sisters, something is always going on with them whether something else is going on somewhere else too =D Awesome story!
10vamp-galBrilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant!
Amazing!
Loved how you didn't ignore the sisters, something is always going on with them whether something else is going on somewhere else too =D Awesome story!
8/5/2004 c1 3SusanCharmed
Great story, Way to go! I like it, i love Leo - Chris bonding. I felt like i was there, watching that story from behind. Hope you will write a sequel!
3SusanCharmedGreat story, Way to go! I like it, i love Leo - Chris bonding. I felt like i was there, watching that story from behind. Hope you will write a sequel!
8/4/2004 c1 Outlaw Pygmy
no you can't send chris back to the past its wrong he needs to be here nok ok i'm done ranting now hehe i vote a seqaul!
no you can't send chris back to the past its wrong he needs to be here nok ok i'm done ranting now hehe i vote a seqaul!
8/4/2004 c1 1Secrets Within
Wow. That was amazing. I absolutely love this. Just... wow. How is it remotely possible for you to have no reviews? I'll have to tell some people about this story! It's great!
If you get the chance, could you possible check out my Charmed fanfic? Shameless plug. ^_^
Are you going to do a sequel/add more? I -really- hope so! Bah bei! ^-^
1Secrets WithinWow. That was amazing. I absolutely love this. Just... wow. How is it remotely possible for you to have no reviews? I'll have to tell some people about this story! It's great!
If you get the chance, could you possible check out my Charmed fanfic? Shameless plug. ^_^
Are you going to do a sequel/add more? I -really- hope so! Bah bei! ^-^