
9/7/2011 c1
4ArtThouStupid
Sorry I didn't review straight away XD
I've never really liked Yami bashing stories before, or if I have, I've kind of ignored that part, as Yami is one of my favorite characters, but I didn't mind it too much in this one :) It also helps that it is needed for the story XD
But yeah, I liked this story quite well, and I say it could have made a good long story/multi-chaptered story :DD

Sorry I didn't review straight away XD
I've never really liked Yami bashing stories before, or if I have, I've kind of ignored that part, as Yami is one of my favorite characters, but I didn't mind it too much in this one :) It also helps that it is needed for the story XD
But yeah, I liked this story quite well, and I say it could have made a good long story/multi-chaptered story :DD
10/14/2006 c1
2AI123
That was one good fic, all hail you and yugi/DMG the best pairing. I really liked the duel, cool idea for a card. I am also writing a yugi?DMG pairing, if you would like to read it AND REVIEW THAT WOULD BE COOL, THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE

That was one good fic, all hail you and yugi/DMG the best pairing. I really liked the duel, cool idea for a card. I am also writing a yugi?DMG pairing, if you would like to read it AND REVIEW THAT WOULD BE COOL, THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE
7/18/2006 c1
13Applecake
I love this little fic! The Dark Magician Girl is my favorite out of all the duel monsters. And it's wonderful to see something like this about her. Great! Lol. Your stories are all very good! You're going on my watch list. ^_^b
~Apple-chan~

I love this little fic! The Dark Magician Girl is my favorite out of all the duel monsters. And it's wonderful to see something like this about her. Great! Lol. Your stories are all very good! You're going on my watch list. ^_^b
~Apple-chan~
5/25/2005 c1 Guest
I like this story! this is 'most' interesting, and well done. This a great One-shot.It's one of the best that ever seen.The pairing is well thought out, as is the story.You captured the emotions very well,without overdoing it.I can't believe Yami could be that mean.This is going on my favorite stories list.(please, if you have the time if you my story 'An Innocent Phantom',I think you'll like it!) Well done!
I like this story! this is 'most' interesting, and well done. This a great One-shot.It's one of the best that ever seen.The pairing is well thought out, as is the story.You captured the emotions very well,without overdoing it.I can't believe Yami could be that mean.This is going on my favorite stories list.(please, if you have the time if you my story 'An Innocent Phantom',I think you'll like it!) Well done!
12/31/2004 c1 Yugi Fan
this is a really nice fic. I like the Dark Magician Girl in my deck too. its my favorite card.
send me an E-mail if you like
this is a really nice fic. I like the Dark Magician Girl in my deck too. its my favorite card.
send me an E-mail if you like
8/18/2004 c1
7Fagor
"..."-I have NO idea what that means.
Nonetheles, good. Motivates me for an injection story. Heh heh. Here comes the faces!
-_-o, ^.^, (o_o), o_0, ^_^, (O_-)
that last one is british, just for you. Heh heh

"..."-I have NO idea what that means.
Nonetheles, good. Motivates me for an injection story. Heh heh. Here comes the faces!
-_-o, ^.^, (o_o), o_0, ^_^, (O_-)
that last one is british, just for you. Heh heh
8/5/2004 c1
89DJ Rodriguez
Wow! Jeff, you and your sister there are just too cool! I love this fanfic a lot, and I'm really honored that you mentioned me!
This story had everything; action, plot, twist, betrayal, duty, honor, and also love! You are da man, Sword Master!
I hope more Yugi/DMG fanfics come out soon, and all of them are inspired because of us! Jeff, you are a very talented writer! Thanks for writing this! Keep it up!

Wow! Jeff, you and your sister there are just too cool! I love this fanfic a lot, and I'm really honored that you mentioned me!
This story had everything; action, plot, twist, betrayal, duty, honor, and also love! You are da man, Sword Master!
I hope more Yugi/DMG fanfics come out soon, and all of them are inspired because of us! Jeff, you are a very talented writer! Thanks for writing this! Keep it up!