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4/30/2006 c1 14IndeMaat
I think I will have to side with the now deleted other reviewers. You have written much better slash stories than this one. The main problems for me are that I didn't recognized the characters much; that Face realised he wanted Murdock as a lover when he gave him the kiss of life (the kiss of life is not a sex thing); that Murdock tried to undo Face's belt in the hospital (wasn't he on the edge of death mere hours before?). Further I don't think you're supposed to do CPR on someone with a chest wound as you would be pushing the blood out of them.
1/13/2005 c1 Lissewen
OMG! I cannot believe the cruel people who did review your beautiful story! This fic had me so scared that Murdock was gonna die! I like the way you brought out the more serious side of Murdock in this story. You are a very talented writer, and I am now hooked on Murdock/Face slash! Lots of huggles for writing this awesome fic!

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