for The Return8/25/2005 c7 Wings
woaahh! That was mad! This is like the anime never ended ^_^ You have a whole new story goin on here! And damn im glad its not yaoi! So much action...and can i sense romance in the air? Huh? Huh? *Nudge nudge*
update it soon! (btw,...i feel bad for you, such good chapters,...yet so few reviews...)
woaahh! That was mad! This is like the anime never ended ^_^ You have a whole new story goin on here! And damn im glad its not yaoi! So much action...and can i sense romance in the air? Huh? Huh? *Nudge nudge*
update it soon! (btw,...i feel bad for you, such good chapters,...yet so few reviews...)
8/15/2005 c6 
6Athina Dark-Angel of Death
Hurry hurry please I really don't like waiting for the next chapter this is so good and I wanna see what happens next.
6Athina Dark-Angel of DeathHurry hurry please I really don't like waiting for the next chapter this is so good and I wanna see what happens next.
4/24/2005 c6 Athina Dark-Angel of Death
I really like this story but this is one problem with your transition from chapter to chapter. You completely dropped of and forgot the condition of Daisuke and what they were doing and just switch to him being at home for your next seen when you went from chapter 5 to 6 and didn't tell us what happened. Other then that keep it up.
I really like this story but this is one problem with your transition from chapter to chapter. You completely dropped of and forgot the condition of Daisuke and what they were doing and just switch to him being at home for your next seen when you went from chapter 5 to 6 and didn't tell us what happened. Other then that keep it up.
4/13/2005 c3 lahz
Very good!
It's "Ohaiyo" not "Ohio". Ohio is a state. WOOHOO! Ok siriously now...
Very good!
It's "Ohaiyo" not "Ohio". Ohio is a state. WOOHOO! Ok siriously now...
4/12/2005 c6 1yaoilovershiro
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4/8/2005 c6 RazorBladexIceCream
SWEET! You updated! (Faints) (Then dies)
zombie me: Plaese update before I suck your blood!
SWEET! You updated! (Faints) (Then dies)
zombie me: Plaese update before I suck your blood!
3/1/2005 c1 17Constructor
Now, I'm pretty sure I've review'd this story earlier, but I was just at your author page, and desided that some extra encouraging is in order.
I mean, really, there aren't that many good fics at all out there, specially not about DNA, so I was REALLY relieved, when I found this fic. It is, really, in all things considered perfect. I, at least, am waiting exitedly for a new chapter! So, please keep up writing...Oh and one thing, thanks for making Daisuke more of a leading charakter. I am really anooyed in all the stories out there, that are just about Dark, or are some sort of Daisuke/Satoshi... So, for last time, thanks...
17ConstructorNow, I'm pretty sure I've review'd this story earlier, but I was just at your author page, and desided that some extra encouraging is in order.
I mean, really, there aren't that many good fics at all out there, specially not about DNA, so I was REALLY relieved, when I found this fic. It is, really, in all things considered perfect. I, at least, am waiting exitedly for a new chapter! So, please keep up writing...Oh and one thing, thanks for making Daisuke more of a leading charakter. I am really anooyed in all the stories out there, that are just about Dark, or are some sort of Daisuke/Satoshi... So, for last time, thanks...
2/28/2005 c5 RazorBladexIceCream
YESA... (Little sister is about to slap me) (I use hands as protection.) I'm okay... (Little sister puts hand down.) Please update soon.
YESA... (Little sister is about to slap me) (I use hands as protection.) I'm okay... (Little sister puts hand down.) Please update soon.
2/28/2005 c4 RazorBladexIceCream
HAHAHAHA! (Little sister slaps me.) OW! That hurt fool! Oh! I think this chapter is funny! Now... Youy know what I'm going to say don't you? Leave me alone! Must read on!
HAHAHAHA! (Little sister slaps me.) OW! That hurt fool! Oh! I think this chapter is funny! Now... Youy know what I'm going to say don't you? Leave me alone! Must read on!
2/28/2005 c1 RazorBladexIceCream
Whoa... 0.0 This is great so far... Leave me alone! I'm going to keep reading!... I said leave me alone! Must read!
Whoa... 0.0 This is great so far... Leave me alone! I'm going to keep reading!... I said leave me alone! Must read!