for Three Musketeers8/13/2004 c1 
11Inept
One word: Wow!
More words: I love it so far. Your writing style makes me want to read more and more! (and more!)
I can't wait to read the next chapters! Yay!
11IneptOne word: Wow!
More words: I love it so far. Your writing style makes me want to read more and more! (and more!)
I can't wait to read the next chapters! Yay!
8/13/2004 c4 2Child of the Silvery Moon
finally inuyasha got hit in the nuts when it was needed don't take it wrong i think inu is the best then come koga and then of course sesshomaru neways back to my pint... once in a while he needs it ^_^
2Child of the Silvery Moonfinally inuyasha got hit in the nuts when it was needed don't take it wrong i think inu is the best then come koga and then of course sesshomaru neways back to my pint... once in a while he needs it ^_^
8/13/2004 c4 12Demonchild93
wow this was a really good story but! I'm confused! Who was the guy Kagome was dating! Inuyasha? and whowas her guy best friend? Miroku? I'm so confused! lol keep up the good job though!
12Demonchild93wow this was a really good story but! I'm confused! Who was the guy Kagome was dating! Inuyasha? and whowas her guy best friend? Miroku? I'm so confused! lol keep up the good job though!
8/13/2004 c4 Inu-babe666
i love it... who was the guy kagome was dating... i hope it was naraku and not inuyasha... well i love it... and the person in first person is miroku right... i bet... well sounds good... but in inuyasha... update soon..
i love it... who was the guy kagome was dating... i hope it was naraku and not inuyasha... well i love it... and the person in first person is miroku right... i bet... well sounds good... but in inuyasha... update soon..
8/13/2004 c4 6Quiet Escapist
Wow, this is so good! I'm sad it's gonna end tomorrow, but I love it all the same. Can I guess? lol. I'm gonna say Miroku is the narrator and Inuyasha is the ex-boyfriend. I might be wrong, but the line "Why can't I have two?" would make sense if it came from Inu.
6Quiet EscapistWow, this is so good! I'm sad it's gonna end tomorrow, but I love it all the same. Can I guess? lol. I'm gonna say Miroku is the narrator and Inuyasha is the ex-boyfriend. I might be wrong, but the line "Why can't I have two?" would make sense if it came from Inu.
8/13/2004 c4 18Kirjava Deamon
Don't tell me this is the end! This is one of the better and more origanal AU's. Not anoth plain out highschool one, but your's have paizzaz.
18Kirjava DeamonDon't tell me this is the end! This is one of the better and more origanal AU's. Not anoth plain out highschool one, but your's have paizzaz.
8/12/2004 c3 8Sharibet
You know, when I was volunteering at the local battered womens' shelter, they taught us that an abuser often tries to isolate the person he's abusing from her friends and family. I think Kagome's in a lot of trouble, and her boyfriend is showing the classic symptoms of an abuser here.
Good job, and the narrator is a very sympathetic character. You're being a terrible tease, though, by withholding identities. ::smile::
8SharibetYou know, when I was volunteering at the local battered womens' shelter, they taught us that an abuser often tries to isolate the person he's abusing from her friends and family. I think Kagome's in a lot of trouble, and her boyfriend is showing the classic symptoms of an abuser here.
Good job, and the narrator is a very sympathetic character. You're being a terrible tease, though, by withholding identities. ::smile::
8/12/2004 c3 25MsCongeniality
I'm definitely enjoying this so far...and I like the fact that Kagome's situation has been reversed. Rather than watching the person she cares for deal with being caught between two women it seems as though this time it will be she that is caught between two men.
Or I could be wrong...either way, I'm enjoying it so far.
25MsCongenialityI'm definitely enjoying this so far...and I like the fact that Kagome's situation has been reversed. Rather than watching the person she cares for deal with being caught between two women it seems as though this time it will be she that is caught between two men.
Or I could be wrong...either way, I'm enjoying it so far.
8/11/2004 c2 8Sharibet
Interesting...loved the narrator's way of getting Kagome's boyfriend to leave her alone! Heh.
You're setting up some good conflicts here, and the added mystery of "who is the narrator?" Who is the boyfriend? adds to the interest level. Great job, as always!
8SharibetInteresting...loved the narrator's way of getting Kagome's boyfriend to leave her alone! Heh.
You're setting up some good conflicts here, and the added mystery of "who is the narrator?" Who is the boyfriend? adds to the interest level. Great job, as always!
8/11/2004 c2 18Kirjava Deamon
Tell me, where did you get this idea? It's wonderfull. Wonderfull angst, oh yes, well-written drama. Hard thing to find.
18Kirjava DeamonTell me, where did you get this idea? It's wonderfull. Wonderfull angst, oh yes, well-written drama. Hard thing to find.
8/10/2004 c1 8Sharibet
Ooh, a new story! Sorry to hear that you're having difficulties with OW and TM, but I'm sure that the problems will resolve themselves soon. If not, shoot me a note offline-I do a fair amount of critiquing and brainstorming, and I'd be happy to try and help you through your writer's block.
This story's off to an interesting start-so, AU, and Inuyasha isn't a hanyou? I'm assuming the narrator is Miroku, but I'm sure all will be revealed in good time.
Sorry if this is a bit incoherent. I had surgery yesterday and I'm still doped to the gills on Vicodin. Am very glad that you'll be posting installments every day-it'll give me something to look forward to!
8SharibetOoh, a new story! Sorry to hear that you're having difficulties with OW and TM, but I'm sure that the problems will resolve themselves soon. If not, shoot me a note offline-I do a fair amount of critiquing and brainstorming, and I'd be happy to try and help you through your writer's block.
This story's off to an interesting start-so, AU, and Inuyasha isn't a hanyou? I'm assuming the narrator is Miroku, but I'm sure all will be revealed in good time.
Sorry if this is a bit incoherent. I had surgery yesterday and I'm still doped to the gills on Vicodin. Am very glad that you'll be posting installments every day-it'll give me something to look forward to!
8/10/2004 c1 6eMeLyNoOoPeE
man i want to know who the guy is? the nest friend i mean... and the boyfriend... it sounds like inuyasha... but then who would the best friend be? well i await for the next chapter...
6eMeLyNoOoPeEman i want to know who the guy is? the nest friend i mean... and the boyfriend... it sounds like inuyasha... but then who would the best friend be? well i await for the next chapter...
8/10/2004 c1 6Quiet Escapist
Yay! I like where this is going, and your writing style is great too. It makes reading that much more enjoyable, lol. I'll be checking back tomorrow for sure.
6Quiet EscapistYay! I like where this is going, and your writing style is great too. It makes reading that much more enjoyable, lol. I'll be checking back tomorrow for sure.