for You Can't See Me3/22/2012 c9 linda
um, what happened to updating the next chapter?
um, what happened to updating the next chapter?
7/28/2008 c9 mysteryangel123
one hell of a story man! update soon i m eager to read the next chapter...
one hell of a story man! update soon i m eager to read the next chapter...
11/22/2007 c9 
8DmonXtrmN8r
oh my god, this is a amazing story! you must MUST update soon, PLEASE! Thankies
8DmonXtrmN8roh my god, this is a amazing story! you must MUST update soon, PLEASE! Thankies
10/29/2007 c9 7tearsofacrescent
This is such a good story, please update soon! :D I wanna read where Keiko beats the Yuki girls butt! XD
7tearsofacrescentThis is such a good story, please update soon! :D I wanna read where Keiko beats the Yuki girls butt! XD
9/6/2007 c9 3Crystalized Rain
Keiko is so awesome in this fic, and I love it~! Please update soon, I can't wait~!
3Crystalized RainKeiko is so awesome in this fic, and I love it~! Please update soon, I can't wait~!
8/23/2007 c9 5MiSs LiSsi LisS
YAY! I'm glad you updated so quickly...you updated so quickly that I didn't even realize that you did! haha, we'll I'm glad it didn't take years and I really hope you update soon! REading how Keiko will "go Rambo on Yuki's ass" will be very interesting indeed!
-Hikage Yami
5MiSs LiSsi LisSYAY! I'm glad you updated so quickly...you updated so quickly that I didn't even realize that you did! haha, we'll I'm glad it didn't take years and I really hope you update soon! REading how Keiko will "go Rambo on Yuki's ass" will be very interesting indeed!
-Hikage Yami
8/22/2007 c9 hayley
that was a good story.
that was a good story.
8/19/2007 c9 3CherryBomb91
I can't get over how much I love Keiko in this fanfic. I really like the intensity that the 8th and 9th chapters have in them. Haha, Keiko's going to go Rambo on Yuki's ass, huh? That should be very fun! I hated Yuki as a human, and I hate her even more now that she's a demon and hurting Yusuke. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
3CherryBomb91I can't get over how much I love Keiko in this fanfic. I really like the intensity that the 8th and 9th chapters have in them. Haha, Keiko's going to go Rambo on Yuki's ass, huh? That should be very fun! I hated Yuki as a human, and I hate her even more now that she's a demon and hurting Yusuke. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
8/19/2007 c9 6MesmiraculouslyMirthful
It's nice to see that keiko is taking charge! I can't wait for her to 'go rambo on Yuki's ass' as you so amazingly put it...Thank you for the update!
6MesmiraculouslyMirthfulIt's nice to see that keiko is taking charge! I can't wait for her to 'go rambo on Yuki's ass' as you so amazingly put it...Thank you for the update!
8/19/2007 c9 12Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN
SWEET! I love Keiko! I like how in this story you've reversed the roles and made it so Keiko has to repay Yusuke for everything he's done for her! I love this story and I hope she kicks Yuki's stupid demonic ass! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how this goes!
12Hiei-Riku-RubedoFANSWEET! I love Keiko! I like how in this story you've reversed the roles and made it so Keiko has to repay Yusuke for everything he's done for her! I love this story and I hope she kicks Yuki's stupid demonic ass! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how this goes!
8/17/2007 c8 5MiSs LiSsi LisS
WEll, I've never read your story before, but I just read it all and thought it was excellent! I love these kind of stories.
Oh, and where did you get the idea for the title? You said you'd tell if I asked.
Anyway, please update soon...and don't take years, please.
j/k I understand that it takes a while to write a great chapter, and luckily all these chapters were wonderful.
I shall wait for the next chapter
-Hikage Yami
5MiSs LiSsi LisSWEll, I've never read your story before, but I just read it all and thought it was excellent! I love these kind of stories.
Oh, and where did you get the idea for the title? You said you'd tell if I asked.
Anyway, please update soon...and don't take years, please.
j/k I understand that it takes a while to write a great chapter, and luckily all these chapters were wonderful.
I shall wait for the next chapter
-Hikage Yami