Reviews: CommitmentPG Version

8/1/2023 c1

39fictionalmike
Excellent story-telling; this was a pleasure to read.

11/18/2004 c1

15SarahKathryn
I think you should've separated the chapters, it would've made it easier to read. And this is still technically a R story but other then that is good.

8/20/2004 c1 carol
great story

8/16/2004 c1 starryeyes10
great story.