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3/22/2013 c1 Guest
Terrible.
3/22/2013 c1 take this down
Very clunky. The song fits somewhat once or twice i guess but you could have done much better. Your transitions were shoddy and the layout was horrible to say the least.
3/22/2013 c1 ugh
I really tried to like this but your not a very good writer.
12/16/2004 c1 sunflower0986
aww thats cute! thanks for reviewing wishing on a star, i know that's not what happens, lets call it an 'alternate universe' sort of thing. i just felt like typing the start of that paragraph, and then decided to finish it like that, and then my friend told me that's not what happens...whoops! good story though. the lyrics of the song are really nice. i usually like spike/faye stuff, but this is really good. honestly,it rocks!
9/14/2004 c1 5Orochimaru Mitarashi
This is great! I love that song!
8/19/2004 c1 3astroz0mbies
I was confused on some parts, but after re-reading it a few times I got it. Nicely done. :o)

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